Draft of Install Test SOP, Could you help to find some problems?

[Liam]

Greetings,

    Great!Thanks for your very patient check and comments.This draft
really has lots of mistakes which need to correct.I will have a
modification immediately.Thank you again.

Regards,
Liam

> On Mon, 2009-06-29 at 10:45 +0800, Liam wrote:
>> Greetings,
>>
>>        This is a draft (standard operating procedure) for Fedora Install
>> test.This document involves process or steps by which QA organize
>> install test in community. The purpose of SOP is to make QA's
>> responsibilities transparent,so anyone can join + lead + contribute in
>> this test in the near future.
>>        This page is only a draft now,need your suggestions and
>> corrections,do you have some comments?
>>        The page of draft at:
>> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Liam/Draft_Install_Test_SOP
> 
> Nice!  I think this starts to capture a fair amount of the steps
> involved when attempting to organize collaborative testing against an
> upcoming milestone (e.g. Alpha, Beta).
> 
>        * I've slightly reworded the introduction and moved it above the
>          table of contents.  Hopefully this doesn't dilute the message
>          you were trying to convey, just let me know.
>        * Perhaps unintentional, the install test dates should be prior to
>          the official milestone release.  The testing efforts described
>          in this process are intended to provide data for a GO / NO_GO
>          release decision.  But you bring up a good point about
>          collecting results *after* the milestone has been released.
>          Perhaps we need to spell that out.  I don't have any good
>          suggestions at the moment, I will contemplate a bit ...
> 
> Some other minor suggestions I might offer:
>        * Perhaps similar to the comment Adam Williamson had regarding the
>          use of spacing around question mark '?' in the Xorg Debugging
>          document.  Make sure to follow each period '.' with two spaces,
>          and each comma ',' with a single space.
>        * When linking to other pages on the wiki, try to use the
>          [[PageName]] syntax.
>        * FYI ... I've gone ahead and added this to the category
>          [[Category:QA SOPs]]
> 
> Thanks,
> James
>