Feedback needed : Fedora 15 Announcement

[Adam Williamson]

On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 21:48 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> On 05/19/2011 09:09 PM, Adam Williamson wrote:
> > On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 14:42 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> > I changed 'elaborate' to 'powerful' when talking about systemd's
> > dependency resolution mechanism. 'Elaborate' has ambiguous connotations,
> > whereas those of 'powerful' are pretty straightforwardly positive.
> 
> That's a direct copy paste from
> http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/.   Admittedly,  I
> helped with that but we should change both or neither.

well, obviously I'd suggest changing upstream to match, but hey, do what
you feel. =) I find that 'elaborate' can easily be used to attack
something.
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