Typo and not perfect places

[Alick Zhao]

On 12/19/2013 06:49 PM, Christopher Meng wrote:
> Hi all.
> 
> Quoted from http://doc.fedoraproject.org/zh-CN/Fedora/20/html/Release_Notes/sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Desktop.html#sect-Desktop:
> 
> "Work faster: 没有准备按钮，因为没有必要去准备。\nCura
> 带有一个新的、更快的切片引擎，在您准备您的印版时，这些切片也实时准备着。以前需花上几个小时来准备模型，现在需要几分钟而已。"
> 
> \n shouldn't be included.
> 

Fixed on tx. Thanks.

佟辉对这个句子可能还有改进/修改建议。我把其链接附在这里了：
https://fedora.transifex.com/projects/p/fedora-release-notes/translate/#zh_CN/Printing/19529984

为什么还没看到佟辉的邮件？

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Alick
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