[PATCH] Fix English-language style/usage in Cloud download page
Paul W. Frields
stickster at gmail.com
Fri May 18 14:55:35 UTC 2012
From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster at gmail.com>
* Cut down on exclamation marks
* Replace ellipsis character with three period (.) marks
* Fix incorrect wording
---
fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html | 6 +++---
fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot | 6 +++---
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
index bf9c063..3f1e316 100644
--- a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
+++ b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
@@ -274,10 +274,10 @@
<div id="cloud-versions">
<noscript><a name="clouds"><hr /></a></noscript>
- <h3>${_('Fedora In The Clouds!')}</h3>
- <p>${_('… Let\'s your dreams be reallity!')}</p>
+ <h3>${_('Fedora in ihe Clouds')}</h3>
+ <p>${_('...Lets your dreams become reality!')}</p>
<div class="grid_12 alpha omega">
- <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora %(release)s Amazone EC2') % {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
+ <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora %(release)s Amazon EC2') % {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
</div>
<div class="clear"></div>
diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
index ef53705..7d87a6b 100644
--- a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
+++ b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
msgstr ""
"Project-Id-Version: PROJECT VERSION\n"
"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: EMAIL at ADDRESS\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 11:01+0200\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 10:19-0400\n"
"PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
"Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL at ADDRESS>\n"
"Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL at li.org>\n"
@@ -1080,11 +1080,11 @@ msgid ""
msgstr ""
#: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:277
-msgid "Fedora In The Clouds!"
+msgid "Fedora in ihe Clouds"
msgstr ""
#: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:278
-msgid "… Let's your dreams be reality!"
+msgid "...Lets your dreams become reality!"
msgstr ""
#: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:280
--
1.7.10.1
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