[PATCH] Fix English-language style/usage in Cloud download page

[Paul W. Frields]

*UGH!* I messed up the patch. Let me try again. :-)


On Fri, May 18, 2012 at 10:55:35AM -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster at gmail.com>
> 
> * Cut down on exclamation marks
> * Replace ellipsis character with three period (.) marks
> * Fix incorrect wording
> ---
>  fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html |    6 +++---
>  fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot                    |    6 +++---
>  2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
> index bf9c063..3f1e316 100644
> --- a/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
> +++ b/fedoraproject.org/data/content/get-fedora-options.html
> @@ -274,10 +274,10 @@
>  
>                      <div id="cloud-versions">
>                          <noscript><a name="clouds"><hr /></a></noscript>
> -                        <h3>${_('Fedora In The Clouds!')}</h3>
> -                        <p>${_('… Let\'s your dreams be reallity!')}</p>
> +                        <h3>${_('Fedora in ihe Clouds')}</h3>
> +                        <p>${_('...Lets your dreams become reality!')}</p>
>                              <div class="grid_12 alpha omega">
> -                                <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora %(release)s Amazone EC2') % {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
> +                                <h4 class="area-callout">${_('Fedora %(release)s Amazon EC2') % {'release':global_variables.release['curr_id']}}</h4>
>                              </div>
>  
>                              <div class="clear"></div>
> diff --git a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
> index ef53705..7d87a6b 100644
> --- a/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
> +++ b/fedoraproject.org/po/fedora-web.pot
> @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
>  msgstr ""
>  "Project-Id-Version: PROJECT VERSION\n"
>  "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: EMAIL at ADDRESS\n"
> -"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 11:01+0200\n"
> +"POT-Creation-Date: 2012-05-18 10:19-0400\n"
>  "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
>  "Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL at ADDRESS>\n"
>  "Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL at li.org>\n"
> @@ -1080,11 +1080,11 @@ msgid ""
>  msgstr ""
>  
>  #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:277
> -msgid "Fedora In The Clouds!"
> +msgid "Fedora in ihe Clouds"
>  msgstr ""
>  
>  #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:278
> -msgid "… Let's your dreams be reality!"
> +msgid "...Lets your dreams become reality!"
>  msgstr ""
>  
>  #: data/content/get-fedora-options.html:280
> -- 
> 1.7.10.1
> 

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