Fedora Release notes - just a few more strings

[Pete Travis]

On Dec 9, 2013 6:02 PM, "Jérôme Fenal" <jfenal at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> 2013/12/10 Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>:
> > I've just updated POTs on Transifex for the Fedora 20 Release Notes.
> > There isn't a lot, just a section on 3D printing that was commented out
> > pending package reviews. Note to self: Publican does not create strings
> > for commented out content!
> >
> > You can find updated builds at
> > https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/ for your review. No
> > issues building so far.
> >
> > Thanks for your efforts, and happy translating.
>
> Hi Pete,
>
> For consistency sake, can you please set the columns either in or out
> of the emphasis tags?
> <emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:
> <emphasis>Plan better:</emphasis>
> <emphasis>Build Stronger:</emphasis>
>
> Double column in the same sentence:
> <emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:There's no prepare button, because
> there is no need to prepare:
> The second one could be replaced by a point "."
>
> And avoid usage of see vocab as per guidelines -> s/see/refer to/
>
> Regards,
>
> J.
> --
> Jérôme Fenal
> --
>

Yes, I will correct it soon.  Thanks!

--Pete
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