F21 documentation

Thu Jan 29 16:43:25 UTC 2015

OK,

elections-guide:
(Fedora_Contributor_Documentation-1-Fedora_Elections_Guide-ca.pdf)

elections-guide has been translated into Catalan language, but the
following two paragraphs are not displayed as translated in Section 1.2,
page 1:

To accurately demonstrate the concepts of Range Voting in action, it is
necessary to use a fictional election where 7 candidates are standing
(Candidates A to G). If three eligible voters were to choose their level of
preference as explained in Secció 1.1, «Conceptes de la votació
preferencial» a data table such as Taula 1.1, «Exemple de paperetes
senzill» can be formed to display the data and demonstrate how a winner
would be defined.

Zero votes have not altered the result due to the summing method being used
and can be intrepreted as the voter having no preference or abstaining.

In page 2, the title "Fedora Elections Guide" (Guia de Fedora Elections) is
displayed two times, the first occurrence should be removed and leave only
"Fedora Contributor Documentation" (Documentació de col·laboradors de
Fedora).

openssh-guide: (Fedora-19-OpenSSH_Guide-ca.pdf)

openssh-guide has been translated into Catalan language, and I reviewed it
on F19 Draft.

technical-notes: (Fedora-20-Technical_Notes-ca.pdf)

technical-notes has been translated into Catalan language, and I reviewed
it on F20 release.

release-notes: (Fedora-21-Release_Notes-ca.pdf)

release-notes has been translated into Catalan language. some
paragraphs/sections are not displayed as translated:

Section 2. Fedora products, in 1st warning box.

Update or installation operations may involve the fedora-release packages,
sometimes inadvertently due to the way dependencies are resolved.
Environment groups are most susceptible to related conflicts, such as
installing extra desktops on Fedora Workstation.
(All section 2.1 Fedora Cloud)

Section 2.2.1 Fedora Server Roles

For kickstart installations, you can use the Fedora Server environment
group to deploy Server.

Section 2.2 Fedora Workstation

For kickstart installations, you can use the Fedora Workstation environment
group to deploy Workstation.

(All section 4.1.4 Mate 1.8)

Regards,
Robert

2015-01-29 16:36 GMT+01:00 Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>:

>
> On Jan 29, 2015 8:26 AM, "Robert Antoni Buj i Gelonch" <
> robert.buj at gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Thanks for the info.
> >
> >
> > "Release Notes" has been only translated in some languages in F21, and
> it's the unique tha has been published in other languages.
> >
> > F21, English en-US (only) : Installation Guide, Networking Guide ,
> Security-Enhanced Linux , System Administrators Guide
> >
> > On the other hand, where is "Technical Notes for F21" refered from
> "Release Notes"? (It has not been published yet.)
> >
> >
> > REF: http://docs.fedoraproject.org/toc.html
> >
> >
> > Regards,
> > Robert
> >
>
> The Technical Notes were a version diff of the current and previous DVD
> installation media.  With no generic install media, we will have to rewrite
> tooling and reassess the need/scope of the book.
>
> While I'm here, a friendly reminder:  send me some signal when something
> is ready to publish.
>
> --Pete
>
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