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Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-websites-list at redhat.com
Thu May 17 11:41:10 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/fedora/web/static
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv23484
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Avoid weak gerunds when possible.
Index: index.html
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/static/index.html,v
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retrieving revision 1.2
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Fedora is a Linux operating system that showcases the latest in free and open source software. Fedora is <strong>always free for anyone to use, modify, and distribute.</strong> It is built by people across the globe who work together as a community: the Fedora Project. The Fedora Project is open and anyone is welcome to join.
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- The Fedora Project <strong>leads the advancement of free and open source software.</strong> By using Fedora, the leading edge of software created by the Linux community is in your hands.
+ The Fedora Project <strong>leads the advancement of free and open source software.</strong> When you use Fedora, the leading edge of software created by the Linux community is in your hands.
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<a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview">Learn more >></a>
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