[PATCH 2/9] Amend text of About to emphasise community more

[Al Thomas]

The key theme of the proposal is to make the front page encourage
people to join and contribute to the project.

The importance of being open for security and trust is also
emphasised.
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 index.html |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 6fdb5cc..ecb6771 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -108,10 +108,9 @@
 
 <div id="content">
 <h2>About the Fedora Project</h2>
-<p>Fedora is a Linux-based operating system that showcases the latest in free and open source software. Fedora is <strong>always free for anyone to use, modify, and distribute.</strong>  It is built by people across the globe who work together as a community: the Fedora Project. The Fedora Project is open and anyone is welcome to join.</p>
-<p>The Fedora Project is out front for you, <strong>leading the advancement of free, open software and content</strong>.</p>
-<p><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview">Learn more. &gt;&gt;</a></p>
- 
+<p>Fedora is a community project that builds and develops a leading Linux-based operating system. We are a global and open community and anyone is welcome to join. We promote advancement of free, open source software and content with the latest developments. Fedora is <strong>always free for anyone to use, modify, and distribute.</strong></p>
+<p>The project encourages peer review to lead to greater <a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Security/Features">security</a> and trust ... <a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview">Learn more. &gt;&gt;</a></p>
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 <div id="screenshot-banner"><a href="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_tour"><img src="static/images/f12launch.png" alt="Fedora 12"></a></div>
 
 <div id="current_release">
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1.6.6.1