Correction suggestion to features page

[Jef van Schendel]

2010/11/9 Turner, Rick <RTurner at intercalleurope.com>

> Hi, I think the sentence on this page:
> http://fedoraproject.org/en/features/
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> *“You can use the Fedora operating system to replace or to run alongside
> of other operating systems”***
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> Should read:
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> *“You can use the Fedora operating system to replace or run alongside
> other operating systems”*
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Hi Rick,

English is not my native language so I had to do a little research, but it
seems that both "alongside" and "alongside of" are acceptable uses. So I
think it's fine if we leave it like this.

Maybe someone with more knowledge on this subject can tell us which version
is better, style-wise?

No offence intended. I’m just trying to help.
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None taken, feedback like this is good, even if it's minor spelling errors.

Jef
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