Some suggestions for Marketing notes for FW 21

[Elad Alfassa]

On Tue, Sep 9, 2014 at 5:35 PM, drago01 <drago01 at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Tue, Sep 9, 2014 at 3:46 PM, Christian Schaller <cschalle at redhat.com> wrote:
>> Hi everyone,
>> Here are some draft notes I prepared to try to help our marketing team
>> build up some release notes and press material on the Fedora Workstation release.
>> Already sent it to the Working Group members, but I thought I send it out to these two
>> lists for further review and suggestions.
>>
>> Christian
>> --------------------
>>
>> Fedora Workstation Marketing
>>
>> The Fedora Workstation is a new take on desktop development from the Fedora
>> Community. Instead of seeing ourselves primarily as passive packagers of any
>> software we manage to find we are now instead picking the best components out
>> there and doing a lot of of work to integrate and polish them, presenting you
>> with something you will feel is a much more polished and targeted product
>> than what you seen before from the Fedora community. We want our desktop operating
>> system to solve your problems, not be your problem.
>>
>> Easy access to all your Software
>> The cornerstone of the Fedora Workstation is our Software installer application, or
>> our appstore if you like.. It provides a modern and fast interface for finding all
>> any kind of desktop software for your Fedora Workstation. In Fedora 21 we are using
>> the new hawkeye backend [...]
>
> That will trigger a "wtf is a hawkeye backend" to pretty much anyone
> that does not know the history here and/or about yum/dnf/PackageKit
> internals. So I'd rephrase it to say that its faster etc. without
> going into details like the name of the PK backend.
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Yep, I agree, leave implementation details out of this.
Also, I'm pretty sure the library is called hawkey and not hawkeye

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-Elad Alfassa.