[release-notes] proofread Virtualization beat

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Sun Oct 28 21:01:05 UTC 2012


commit 5fbc57a83b181b864cfb22f32fb553f18da1889c
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Sun Oct 28 15:00:52 2012 -0600

    proofread Virtualization beat

 en-US/Virtualization.xml |   89 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
index f111e0c..73b174c 100644
--- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -4,65 +4,76 @@
 <?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.informatik.fh-wiesbaden.de/~werntges/home_t/proj/dbkcss102/wysiwygdocbook1.02/driver.css" type="text/css"?>
 
 <section>
-  
   <title>Virtualization</title>
-      <section>
-        
-          <title>Live Snapshotting of Virtual Machines </title>
-        <para>The virtualization stack in Fedora has provided the ability to take "snapshots" of a virtual machine for many releases. These functions have however always required that the virtual machine be paused or stopped while the storage snapshot was created. Recent updates included in Fedora 17 allowed for <package>qemu</package> and <package>libvirt</package> to create snapshots of a virtual machine without requiring any downtime. </para><para>Live snapshot creation now works even for virtual machines using disk images stored in RAW format. In these cases <package>libvirt</package> creates snapshots using external QCOW2 files - transparently switching the virtual machine to run on the new external image(s) once created.</para>
-      </section><section>
-        
-          <title>KVM supports hibernating and suspending guests </title>
-        <para> Suspend and hibernate now works from within KVM virtual machines. These can also be invoked on virtual machines from the host using <command>virsh</command>. </para>
-      </section><section>
-        
-          <title>Manage Virtualized Environments with oVirt 3.1 </title>
-        <para>Fedora 17 included the packages required to support a minimal installation of the oVirt virtualization management platform. This initial offering has been significantly expanded in Fedora 18. In addition to the existing functionality, it is now possible to use a Fedora installation as a fully fledged oVirt "Engine" - providing a graphical management console for your virtualized environments. </para>
-        <para>Project homepage: <ulink url="http://ovirt.org.">http://ovirt.org.</ulink>
-        </para><section>
-          
-            <title>oVirt Engine Installation </title>
-          <para>The oVirt Engine provides a browser accessible management console for creating, provisioning, and using virtual machines. It also provides facilities for managing the networking and storage needs of the virtualized environment. For users who want to experience the management console but do not have a spare machine to act as a virtualization host an 'all in one' plugin is provided. The 'all in one' plugin allows a system to act as both the oVirt Engine and as a virtualization host. </para>
-          <para>To install the oVirt Engine: </para>
+  <section>
+    <title>Live Snapshotting of Virtual Machines</title>
+    <para>
+    The virtualization stack in Fedora has provided the ability to take "snapshots" of a virtual machine for many releases. These functions have however always required that the virtual machine be paused or stopped while the storage snapshot was created. Recent updates included in Fedora 17 allowed for <package>qemu</package> and <package>libvirt</package> to create snapshots of a virtual machine without requiring any downtime. 
+    </para>
+    <para>Live snapshot creation now works even for virtual machines using disk images stored in <function>RAW</function> format. In these cases <package>libvirt</package> creates snapshots using external <function>QCOW2</function> files - transparently switching the virtual machine to run on the new external image(s) once created.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>KVM supports hibernating and suspending guests </title>
+    <para> Suspend and hibernate now works from within <application>KVM</application> virtual machines. These can also be invoked on virtual machines from the host using <command>virsh</command>. 
+    </para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>Manage Virtualized Environments with <productname>oVirt 3.1</productname> </title>
+    <para>Fedora 17 included the packages required to support a minimal installation of the <productname>oVirt</productname> virtualization management platform. This initial offering has been significantly expanded in Fedora 18. In addition to the existing functionality, it is now possible to use a Fedora installation as a fully fledged <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>"Engine"</function> - providing a graphical management console for your virtualized environments. </para>
+        <para>
+          Project homepage: <ulink url="http://ovirt.org.">http://ovirt.org.</ulink>
+        </para>
+        <section>
+          <title><productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function> Installation </title>
+          <para>The <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function> provides a browser accessible management console for creating, provisioning, and using virtual machines. It also provides facilities for managing the networking and storage needs of the virtualized environment. For users who want to experience the management console but do not have a spare machine to act as a virtualization host an 'all in one' plugin is provided. The 'all in one' plugin allows a system to act as both the <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function> and as a virtualization host. </para>
+          <para>To install the <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function>: </para>
           <para>
             <orderedlist>
               <listitem>
-                <para> Log in to the Fedora system on which you wish to host oVirt Engine as the <literal>root</literal> user.</para>
+                <para> Log in to the Fedora system on which you wish to host <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function> as the <literal>root</literal> user.</para>
               </listitem><listitem>
                 <para> Install the <package>ovirt-engine</package> package with <command>yum install ovirt-engine</command>.</para>
               </listitem>
               <listitem>
-                <para> Run the <command>engine-setup</command> script and follow the prompts to complete installation of oVirt Engine.</para>
+                <para> Run the <command>engine-setup</command> script and follow the prompts to complete installation of <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function>.</para>
               </listitem>
               <listitem>
-                <para> Once the Engine has been installed successfully the script will provide instructions for accessing the web Administration Portal. </para>
+                <para> Once the <function>Engine</function> has been installed successfully the script will provide instructions for accessing the web Administration Portal. </para>
               </listitem>
             </orderedlist>
-        </section><section>
-          
+          </para>
+          </section>
+          <section>
             <title>Virtualization Host Installation </title>
-          <para>For each system you wish to use as a virtualization host: </para>
-          <orderedlist>
+            <para>For each system you wish to use as a virtualization host: </para>
+            <orderedlist>
+              <listitem>
+                <para> Install Fedora 18. A minimal installation is sufficient. Ensure that you set password for the <literal>root</literal> user and that SSH is enabled.</para>
+              </listitem>
+              <listitem>
+                <para> Log in to your <productname>oVirt</productname> <function>Engine</function> installation using your web browser. </para>
+            </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para> Install Fedora 18. A minimal installation is sufficient. Ensure that you set password for the <literal>root</literal> user and that SSH is enabled.</para>
-            </listitem><listitem>
-              <para> Log in to your oVirt Engine installation using your web browser. </para>
-            </listitem><listitem>
               <para> Select <guilabel>Add</guilabel> from the <guilabel>Hosts</guilabel> tab.</para>
-            </listitem><listitem>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
               <para> Enter a name for the Fedora host. </para>
-            </listitem><listitem>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
               <para> Provide the hostname or IP address and root password for the Fedora host </para>
-            </listitem><listitem>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
               <para> Click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.</para>
             </listitem>
-          </orderedlist><para>There will be a short delay as your host downloads and installs required packages. Your Fedora host will then be added to the environment.</para>
-        </section><section>
-          
+          </orderedlist>
+          <para>There will be a short delay as your host downloads and installs required packages. Your Fedora host will then be added to the environment.</para>
+          </section>
+          <section>
             <title>Additional Information </title>
-          <para>A Quick Start Guide for oVirt 3.1 is available at <ulink url="http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide.">http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide.</ulink>
-          </para>
+            <para>A Quick Start Guide for <productname>oVirt</productname> 3.1 is available at <ulink url="http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide.">http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide.</ulink>
+            </para>
+          </section>
         </section>
-
   
 </section>


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