[release-notes] proofread Cloud beat
Pete Travis
immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Sun Oct 28 21:23:42 UTC 2012
commit 5950441555f350cc296ad581ef5bf3836410c79a
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Sun Oct 28 15:10:32 2012 -0600
proofread Cloud beat
en-US/Cloud.xml | 32 ++++++++++++++++++--------------
en-US/Web_Servers.xml | 19 ++++++++-----------
2 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Cloud.xml b/en-US/Cloud.xml
index f8ea803..4aab5fb 100644
--- a/en-US/Cloud.xml
+++ b/en-US/Cloud.xml
@@ -11,22 +11,26 @@
<section>
<title>Eucalpytus </title>
<para>
- <pacakage>eucalyptus</package> allows the creation of private Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) clouds that are compatible with Amazon Web Services.</para>
- </section><section>
- <title>OpenShift Origin </title>
- <para>OpenShift Origin brings Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS) support to Fedora 18. </para>
- </section><section>
- <title>OpenStack </title>
- <para>Fedora 18 includes the latest version of the OpenStack IaaS cloud service, codenamed "Folsom". </para>
+ <package>eucalyptus</package> allows the creation of private <literal>Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS)</literal> clouds that are compatible with <productname>Amazon Web Services</productname>.
+ </para>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title><productname>OpenShift Origin</productname> </title>
+ <para><productname>OpenShift Origin</productname> brings <literal>Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS)</literal> support to Fedora 18. </para>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title><productname>OpenStack</productname> </title>
+ <para>Fedora 18 includes the latest version of the <productname>OpenStack</productname> IaaS cloud service, codenamed <productname>Folsom</productname>. </para>
<section>
- <title>Heat </title>
- <para> Heat was added to provide an AWS CloudFormation API for OpenStack. Heat provides a standardized method for OpenStack users to launch multiple applications in an OpenStack cloud from a template file describing the cloud application. Administrators are encouraged to read the project's <ulink url="https://github.com/heat-api/heat/blob/master/docs/GettingStarted.rst#readme"> getting started guide</ulink> or the browse their <ulink url="https://github.com/heat-api/heat/wiki"> wiki</ulink>. </para>
+ <title><productname>Heat</productname> </title>
+ <para> <productname>Heat</productname> was added to provide an <productname>AWS CloudFormation</productname> API for <productname>OpenStack</productname>. <productname>Heat</productname> provides a standardized method for <productname>OpenStack</productname> users to launch multiple applications in an <productname>OpenStack</productname> cloud from a template file describing the cloud application. Administrators are encouraged to read the project's <ulink url="https://github.com/heat-api/heat/blob/master/docs/GettingStarted.rst#readme"> getting started guide</ulink> or the browse their <ulink url="https://github.com/heat-api/heat/wiki"> wiki</ulink>. </para>
</section>
- </section><section>
- <title>OwnCloud </title>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title><productname>OwnCloud</productname> </title>
<para>
- <package>owncloud</package> provides a server and client to synchronize files across multiple devices, including mobile. This allows users to run their own file synchronization service.</para>
- </section>
-
+ <package>owncloud</package> provides a server and client to synchronize files across multiple devices, including mobile. This allows users to run their own file synchronization service.
+ </para>
+ </section>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Web_Servers.xml b/en-US/Web_Servers.xml
index 355b851..6f25228 100644
--- a/en-US/Web_Servers.xml
+++ b/en-US/Web_Servers.xml
@@ -4,17 +4,14 @@
<?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.informatik.fh-wiesbaden.de/~werntges/home_t/proj/dbkcss102/wysiwygdocbook1.02/driver.css" type="text/css"?>
<section>
-
<title>Web Servers</title>
-
- <section>
- <title>httpd</title>
- <para>The Apache <package>httpd</package> package has been upgraded to version 2.4.3-1, which contains numerous security and peformance fixes.</para>
- </section>
-
- <section>
- <title>lighttpd</title>
- <para>The <package>lighttpd</package> package has been upgraded to version 1.4.32-2.</para>
- </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>httpd</title>
+ <para>The Apache <package>httpd</package> package has been upgraded to version 2.4.3-1, which contains numerous security and peformance fixes.</para>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>lighttpd</title>
+ <para>The <package>lighttpd</package> package has been upgraded to version 1.4.32-2.</para>
+ </section>
</section>
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