[install-guide] Removed Advanced Storage Options and network config sections from Specialized and Networked Disks, p
Jack Reed
jjr at fedoraproject.org
Thu May 16 03:47:30 UTC 2013
commit 75e1255423089e7a452eb72d16c39c764c74c123
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date: Thu May 16 13:47:19 2013 +1000
Removed Advanced Storage Options and network config sections from Specialized and Networked Disks, plus other corrections to reflect new UI
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2a.xml | 10 +++
...Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-FCoE-x86.xml | 15 ++++
...isk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-iSCSI-x86.xml | 23 ++++++
en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-x86.xml | 74 --------------------
...artitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml | 2 +-
...artitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml | 1 +
en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml | 7 +-
.../Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml | 2 +-
.../Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-3.xml | 2 +-
...lized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml | 44 ++++++-----
11 files changed, 81 insertions(+), 101 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2a.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2a.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..bb42fc1
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2a.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,10 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ To install Fedora on specialized storage devices or to configure iSCSI and FCoE connections, click <guibutton>Add a disk</guibutton> under <guilabel>Specialized and Network Disks</guilabel> and refer to <xref linkend="sect-Storage_Device_Selection_Screen-x86" />.
+</para>
+
+
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-FCoE-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-FCoE-x86.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..5e9dec7
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-FCoE-x86.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,15 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<section id="s1-advanced-storage-FCoE-x86">
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Add an FCoE SAN --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-para-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- To configure an FCoE SAN... --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-para-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- On the menu that appears in the next... --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-figure-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Configure FCoE Parameters --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-para-6.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- DCB (Data Center Bridging) is a set of enhancements to the Ethernet protocols -->
+</section>
+
+
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-iSCSI-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-iSCSI-x86.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..4874bd2
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-iSCSI-x86.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,23 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<section id="s1-advanced-storage-iSCSI-x86">
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Add an iSCSI target -->
+
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- To use iSCSI storage devices for the installation, anaconda must be able to discover them as iSCSI targets -->
+
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Repeat the iSCSI discovery and iSCSI login steps as many times as necessary to add all required iSCSI storage. -->
+
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-procedure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- iSCSI discovery -->
+
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-procedure-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Starting an iSCSI session -->
+</section>
+
+
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml
index 8eb1041..43d5d26 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-2.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<title>Configure iSCSI parameters</title>
+<title>Add an iSCSI target</title>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml
index 19d899e..3f6bacb 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage_common-title-3.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<title> Configure FCoE Parameters </title>
+<title>Add an FCoE SAN </title>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
index 1cd9c46..bb06329 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
@@ -34,6 +34,7 @@
Remove linux partitions on selected drives and create default layout
Caution
Use free space on selected drives and create default layout --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Choose your preferred partitioning method... --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2a.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Choose your preferred partitioning method... --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="quick-start" />
<!-- You may want to simply install Fedora on all available disks... --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
<!-- To encrypt all partitions except the /boot partition... --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-note-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="quick-start" />
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
index 206767a..610ff9d 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
<!-- The Other SAN tab --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Devices are grouped under the following tabs: --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Basic Devices Basic storage devices directly connected to --> <para>
- If you do need to configure iSCSI or FCoE storage, click <guibutton>Add Advanced Target</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-x86" />.
+ If you do need to configure iSCSI or FCoE storage, click <guibutton>Add iSCSI Target</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-iSCSI-x86" />, or click <guibutton>Add FCoE SAN</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-FCoE-x86" />.
</para>
<para>
To assign non-friendly multipath device names, click <guibutton>Device Options</guibutton> and uncheck <guilabel>Use friendly names for multipath devices</guilabel>.
@@ -28,8 +28,9 @@
<!-- Important - chain loading --> <para>
When you have selected the storage devices to make available during installation, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> screen.
</para>
- <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- Advanced Storage Options -->
+ <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-iSCSI-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Add an iSCSI Target --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Advanced_Storage-FCoE-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Add an FCoE SAN -->
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
index f8d2055..04c2361 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- The storage devices selection screen displays all storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
+ The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen displays all storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-3.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-3.xml
index a464d4e..165c10d 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- The storage devices selection screen also contains a <guilabel>Search</guilabel> tab that allows you to filter storage devices either by their <firstterm>World Wide Identifier</firstterm> (WWID) or by the port, target, or <firstterm>logical unit number</firstterm> (LUN) at which they are accessed.
+ The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen also contains a <guilabel>Search</guilabel> tab that allows you to filter storage devices either by their <firstterm>World Wide Identifier</firstterm> (WWID) or by the port, target, or <firstterm>logical unit number</firstterm> (LUN) at which they are accessed.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml
index 570ddee..b53854b 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml
@@ -3,53 +3,57 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<variablelist>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>Basic Devices</term>
+ <variablelist>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>Multipath Devices</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Basic storage devices directly connected to the local system, such as hard disk drives and solid-state drives.
+ Storage devices accessible through more than one path, such as through multiple SCSI controllers or Fiber Channel ports on the same system.
</para>
+ <important>
+ <title>Important — device serial numbers must be 16 or 32 characters</title>
+ <para>
+ The installer only detects multipath storage devices with serial numbers that are 16 or 32 characters in length.
+ </para>
+
+ </important>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>Firmware RAID</term>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>Other SAN Devices</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Storage devices attached to a firmware RAID controller.
+ Any other devices available on a storage area network (SAN).
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
+
<varlistentry>
- <term>Multipath Devices</term>
+ <term>Firmware RAID</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Storage devices accessible through more than one path, such as through multiple SCSI controllers or Fiber Channel ports on the same system.
+ Storage devices attached to a firmware RAID controller.
</para>
- <important>
- <title>Important — device serial numbers must be 16 or 32 characters</title>
- <para>
- The installer only detects multipath storage devices with serial numbers that are 16 or 32 characters in length.
- </para>
-
- </important>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>Other SAN Devices</term>
+
+ <!-- <varlistentry>
+ <term>Basic Devices</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Any other devices available on a storage area network (SAN).
+ Basic storage devices directly connected to the local system, such as hard disk drives and solid-state drives.
</para>
</listitem>
- </varlistentry>
+ </varlistentry> -->
+
+
</variablelist>
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