[install-guide] Minor updates to Specialized and Network Disks
Jack Reed
jjr at fedoraproject.org
Thu May 16 04:29:42 UTC 2013
commit 736bd599afc2f89d42b4fc6caabfebcef925bcbf
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date: Thu May 16 14:29:27 2013 +1000
Minor updates to Specialized and Network Disks
en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml | 6 +++---
...Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml | 4 ++--
.../Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml | 2 +-
3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
index 610ff9d..09fc9ff 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
<section id="sect-Storage_Device_Selection_Screen-x86">
<xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-title.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Storage Device Selection Screen --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- The storage devices selection screen displays all storage devices to which anaconda has access. --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- Select storage devices --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- The storage devices selection screen displays all storage devices to which anaconda has access. --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- The Multipath tab --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- The Other SAN tab --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- The Other SAN tab --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Select storage devices --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Devices are grouped under the following tabs: --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Basic Devices Basic storage devices directly connected to --> <para>
If you do need to configure iSCSI or FCoE storage, click <guibutton>Add iSCSI Target</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-iSCSI-x86" />, or click <guibutton>Add FCoE SAN</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-FCoE-x86" />.
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
index dbf61a0..3fae0a0 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<figure float="0">
- <title>Select storage devices — Basic devices</title>
+ <title>Select storage devices — Firmware RAID</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="images/storagedevices/selectstoragedevices.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<para>
- The Basic Devices tab
+ The Firmware RAID tab
</para>
</textobject>
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
index 04c2361..6821ecc 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen displays all storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
+ The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen displays all specialized storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
</para>
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