[install-guide] Minor updates to Specialized and Network Disks

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Thu May 16 04:29:42 UTC 2013


commit 736bd599afc2f89d42b4fc6caabfebcef925bcbf
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu May 16 14:29:27 2013 +1000

    Minor updates to Specialized and Network Disks

 en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml          |    6 +++---
 ...Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml |    4 ++--
 .../Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml  |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
index 610ff9d..09fc9ff 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices-x86.xml
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
 <section id="sect-Storage_Device_Selection_Screen-x86">
 	<xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-title.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Storage Device Selection Screen  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The storage devices selection screen displays all storage devices to which anaconda has access.  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Select storage devices  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The storage devices selection screen displays all storage devices to which anaconda has access.  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  The Multipath tab  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The Other SAN tab  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The Other SAN tab  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Select storage devices  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Devices are grouped under the following tabs:  --> <xi:include href="Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-variablelist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Basic Devices Basic storage devices directly connected to  --> <para>
 	      If you do need to configure iSCSI or FCoE storage, click <guibutton>Add iSCSI Target</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-iSCSI-x86" />, or click <guibutton>Add FCoE SAN</guibutton> and refer to <xref linkend="s1-advanced-storage-FCoE-x86" />.
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
index dbf61a0..3fae0a0 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-figure-1.xml
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <figure float="0">
-	<title>Select storage devices — Basic devices</title>
+	<title>Select storage devices — Firmware RAID</title>
 	 <mediaobject>
 		<imageobject>
 			<imagedata fileref="images/storagedevices/selectstoragedevices.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
 		</imageobject>
 		 <textobject>
 			<para>
-				The Basic Devices tab
+				The Firmware RAID tab
 			</para>
 
 		</textobject>
diff --git a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
index 04c2361..6821ecc 100644
--- a/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Specialized_Storage_Devices_common-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-      The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen displays all storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
+      The <guilabel>Specialized and Networked Disks</guilabel> selection screen displays all specialized storage devices to which <application>anaconda</application> has access.
 </para>
 


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