Fwd: Fedora 20 Beta Release Announcement Draft

[Leslie S Satenstein]

Will someone please do the move for me.   I took some time to fine tooth read the draft, and I am also a working stiff, with a 12hr workday (for now).




 
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 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
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On Thursday, October 17, 2013 9:09 AM, Eric H. Christensen <sparks at fedoraproject.org> wrote:
 
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>On Wed, Oct 16, 2013 at 06:21:46PM -0700, Leslie S Satenstein wrote:
>> Hi Pete, 
>> Well, I took my trusty LibreOfficewriter and did a markup of the aforementioned first draft.   To the group, please review my comments. The changes may appear trivial, but they are to make the document more precise and more readable.
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>When will you be making these changes to the wiki (where the source lives)[0]?  
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>> In case the attachment is stripped due to email processing, here it is inline.  Sorry to do the attachment inline.  I did  not want to file a bugzilla report .  Changes or comments are in yellow.
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>There's no need to put this in an email or file a bugzilla ticket.  The source lives in the wiki and is there as a means of collaborating.  Please make your changes there.
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>[0] https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F20_Beta_release_announcement
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