Some editing ideas for Fedora 21

[Leslie S Satenstein]

Hi Christopher

It works for me.  I worked as  tech writer and editor for topics about ERP.  I had to write for French, an Spanish readers.  The writer should never edit his own work beyond the first go-around.


 
Regards 

 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
SENT FROM MY OPEN SOURCE LINUX SYSTEM.




>________________________________
> From: Christopher Antila <christopher at antila.ca>
>To: Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein at yahoo.com>; For participants of the Documentation Project <docs at lists.fedoraproject.org> 
>Sent: Wednesday, April 30, 2014 12:43 AM
>Subject: Re: Some editing ideas for Fedora 21
> 
>
>Leslie:
>
>
>On 26 April 2014 16:33:53 Leslie S Satenstein wrote:
>> May I also suggest that a the person reading this section of release notes
>> is assumed to have prior Linux knowledge
>> 
>> I took the Fedora 20 release notes and marked them up so that they read much
>> better. By read much better, the opening paragraph of the attached document
>> explains the "raison d'être".
>> 
>> If the attachment is lost, please refer to my public link
>> https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/wip/ReleaseNotes%20Touchups.od
>> t (release notes touchup)
>> 
>> Hope to get your feedback, either favourable or other.
>
>A majority of the Release Notes content is written from scratch with every 
>release. On the other hand, the content in Chapter 1 is mostly carried from 
>one release to the next.
>
>Within the next couple of days, I'll review your comments about Chapter 1, 
>then return them in an ODT file. After this, you can incorporate your revisions 
>either into the Release Notes git repository or on the wiki, along with 
>updates for Fedora 21, to heave them included in the next release.
>
>Will this work for you?
>
>
>Christopher
>
>
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/docs/attachments/20140430/e1a1b556/attachment.html>