Fedora Video

[Roger Sinel]

I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want
to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with "I
will.....".
The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm
distance.
Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.

/Roger
On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" <
chanchito at fedoraproject.org> wrote:

> Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme, however,
> the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit
> the theme.
>
> You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or
> perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or
> melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.
>
> Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please
> do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a
> designer/artist, only an observer.
>
> Thanks again for the work and efforts!  Much appreciated!
>
> On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
> niteshnarayanlalleo at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>> Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
>> You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
>> It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
>> Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
>> Regards
>> Nitesh Narayan Lal
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