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[nitesh narayan lal]

Sure I will make that change . Thanks

On 5/2/13, Roger Sinel <roger.sinel at nordickiwi.com> wrote:
> I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want
> to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with "I
> will.....".
> The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm
> distance.
> Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.
>
> /Roger
> On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" <
> chanchito at fedoraproject.org> wrote:
>
>> Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme,
>> however,
>> the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit
>> the theme.
>>
>> You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or
>> perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or
>> melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.
>>
>> Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please
>> do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a
>> designer/artist, only an observer.
>>
>> Thanks again for the work and efforts!  Much appreciated!
>>
>> On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
>> niteshnarayanlalleo at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi all,
>>> Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
>>> You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
>>> It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
>>> Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
>>> Regards
>>> Nitesh Narayan Lal
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Nitesh Narayan Lal