4 commits - en_US/adminoptions.xml en_US/beginninginstallation.xml en_US/diskpartitioning.xml

[David Nalley]

 en_US/adminoptions.xml          |    8 ++++----
 en_US/beginninginstallation.xml |   14 +++++++++-----
 en_US/diskpartitioning.xml      |    7 ++++---
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 322bbcbadc87c795548f5de1038afe2521752cda
Author: David Nalley <david(a)gnsa.us&gt;
Date:   Fri Nov 21 11:36:23 2008 -0500

    added content to deal with bug 455656

diff --git a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
index 84c9953..214413b 100644
--- a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
+++ b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
@@ -17,11 +17,15 @@
   <note>
     <title>Aborting the Installation</title>
     <para>
-      To abort the installation process at any time before the
-      <guilabel>Installing Packages</guilabel> screen, either press
-     
<keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Del</keycap></keycombo>

-      or power off the computer with the power switch.  &FED; makes no
-      changes to your computer until package installation begins.
+      To abort the installation, either press <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl
+     
</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Del</keycap></keycombo>
+      or power off your computer with the power switch. You may 
+      abort the installation process without consequence at any time 
+      prior to selecting <guibutton>Write changes to disk</guibutton>
+      on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen, 
+      as Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until 
+      that point. Please be aware that stopping the installation 
+      after partitioning has begun can leave your computer unusable.
     </para>
   </note>
   <section id="sn-boot-menu">


commit 685c72af039527c0e7949b9d63bf4e88a4a4bc97
Author: David Nalley <david(a)gnsa.us&gt;
Date:   Fri Nov 21 09:17:40 2008 -0500

    fixed the style error I introduced, and Paul pointed out in comment 2 of ticket
466384

diff --git a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
index 497ea03..15a177a 100644
--- a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
+++ b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@
     <para>
       To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase. 
       Note the use of the term "passphrase", as opposed to the term 
-      "password". This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing 
+      "password." This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing 
       multiple words increases the security of your data. 
     </para>
     <para>


commit dbac4591b38f744b962dac3b7c587ed534550f6b
Author: David Nalley <david(a)gnsa.us&gt;
Date:   Fri Nov 21 08:42:40 2008 -0500

    made some slight wording changes re disk encryption passphrases in bug 466384

diff --git a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
index 0344aa9..497ea03 100644
--- a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
+++ b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
@@ -394,9 +394,10 @@
       </para>
     </note>
     <para>
-      To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase.  You
-      can find more information about good passphrases in <xref
-      linkend="ch-rootpassword"/>.
+      To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase. 
+      Note the use of the term "passphrase", as opposed to the term 
+      "password". This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing 
+      multiple words increases the security of your data. 
     </para>
     <para>
       The encryption provided uses the Linux Unified Key System


commit aa9f9ffaf2f8b15893999b80098e5d7543d841bf
Author: David Nalley <david(a)gnsa.us&gt;
Date:   Fri Nov 21 08:05:03 2008 -0500

    applied fixes to adminoptions.xml from BZ ticket 470669

diff --git a/en_US/adminoptions.xml b/en_US/adminoptions.xml
index 780454e..d4e56ac 100644
--- a/en_US/adminoptions.xml
+++ b/en_US/adminoptions.xml
@@ -354,8 +354,8 @@ Press <enter> for a shell]]></computeroutput>
           5500 when in listening mode. To permit connections to this
           port from other systems, choose <menuchoice>
           <guimenu>System</guimenu>
-          <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
<guimenuitem>Security
-          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+          <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>
+          Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
           <guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
           <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter
<userinput>5500</userinput>
           in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify
@@ -509,8 +509,8 @@ Press <enter> for a shell]]></computeroutput>
           By default, the syslog service listens on UDP port 514. To
           permit connections to this port from other systems, choose
           <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
-          <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
<guimenuitem>Security
-          Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+          <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>
+          Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
           <guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
           <guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter
<userinput>514</userinput>
           in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify