[install-guide] Minor edits and corrections to Adding Partitions section

[Jack Reed]

commit c3fab21db46f9de8376ed311cc697d9b325322da
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com&gt;
Date:   Wed Dec 12 11:25:05 2012 +1000

    Minor edits and corrections to Adding Partitions section

 ...titions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml |    2 +-
 ...titions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml                    |    2 +-
 en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml         |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
index 07c3d37..7bdc594 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 ]>
 <listitem>
 	<para>
-		<guilabel>physical volume (LVM)</guilabel> &mdash; Creating one or more
physical volume (LVM) partitions allows you to create an LVM logical volume. LVM can
improve performance when using physical disks. For more information regarding LVM, refer
to the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
+		<guilabel>physical volume (LVM)</guilabel> &mdash; Creating one or more
physical volume (LVM) partitions allows you to create an LVM logical volume. LVM can
improve performance when using physical disks. To create a RAID device, refer to <xref
linkend="Create_LVM-x86" />. For more information regarding LVM, refer to the
<citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
 	</para>
 </listitem>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
index cef446d..7f1d623 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 ]>
 <listitem>
 	<para>
-		<guilabel>software RAID</guilabel> &mdash; Creating two or more
software RAID partitions allows you to create a RAID device. For more information
regarding RAID, refer to the chapter <citetitle>RAID (Redundant Array of Independent
Disks)</citetitle> in the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment
Guide</citetitle>.
+	      <guilabel>software RAID</guilabel> &mdash; Creating two or more
software RAID partitions allows you to create a RAID device. One RAID partition is
assigned to each disk on the system. To create a RAID device, refer to <xref
linkend="Create_Software_RAID-x86" />. For more information regarding RAID,
refer to the chapter <citetitle>RAID (Redundant Array of Independent
Disks)</citetitle> in the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment
Guide</citetitle>.
 	</para>
 </listitem>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
index 5c80e59..f3ab87d 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
 	 <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Anaconda displays several details for each device listed  -->
<xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  To change which drive/s a mount point should be located on  -->
<para>
-	   At the bottom of the screen, a link will state how many storage devices were selected
in <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> — refer to <xref
linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" />. This link opens the
<guilabel>Selected Devices</guilabel> dialog, where you can specify which
device the bootloader should be installed on. Refer to <xref
linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for more information.
+	   At the bottom of the screen, a link will state how many storage devices were selected
in <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> (refer to <xref
linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" />). This link opens the
<guilabel>Selected Devices</guilabel> dialog, where you can specify which
device the bootloader should be installed on. Refer to <xref
linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for more information.
 	</para>
 	 <!-- <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-4.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
 	   <!--  Using your mouse, click once to highlight a particular field...  -->
<!-- <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-variablelist-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
b/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
index d8adbe8..eb71421 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 <!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
-<title>Adding Partitions</title>
+<title>Adding and Configuring Partitions</title>