4:07 a.m.
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24035
Modified Files:
RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml hardware-reqs-en.xml install-notes-en.xml
multimedia-en.xml overview-en.xml package-movement-en.xml
package-notes-en.xml splash-en.xml
Log Message:
Cleanup before tagging for trans.
Index: RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.3
+++ RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:11 -0000 1.4
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<!-- *************** Local entities *************** -->
- <!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER;
(2005-07-26-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
+ <!ENTITY BOOKID "RELEASE-NOTES-&FCX;&DISTROVER;
(2005-10-25-T04:20-0700)"> <!-- version of manual and date -->
<!ENTITY LOCALVER "5 test1"> <!-- Set value to your choice, when
guide version is out -->
<!-- of sync with FC release, use instead of FEDVER or FEDTESTVER -->
<!ENTITY NAME "Fedora"> <!-- The project's (and software's)
basic name -->
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@
<!ENTITY DISTRO "&FC;"> <!-- The software's name -->
<!ENTITY DISTROVER "&LOCALVER;"> <!-- The software's version
-->
<!ENTITY BUG-NUM "151189"> <!-- Tracker bug number -->
- <!ENTITY BUG-URL
"https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?assigned_to=relnotes%40fedoraproject.org&blocked=151189&bug_file_loc=http%3A%2F%2Ffedoraproject.org%2Fwiki%2FDocsProject%2FReleaseNotes%2FProcess&bug_severity=normal&bug_status=NEW&cc=kwade%40redhat.com&comment=Description%20of%20problem%2C%20bug%2C%20incorrect%20information%2C%20or%20enhancement%20request%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AVersion%20of%20release%20notes%20this%20bug%20refers%20to%3A%0D%0A%0D%0AFedora%20Core%204%20final%20release&component=fedora-docs&contenttypeentry=&contenttypemethod=list&contenttypeselection=text%2Fplain&data=&dependson=&descript!
ion=&estimated_time=0.0&estimated_time_presets=0.0&ext_bz_bug_id=&ext_bz_id=0&form_name=enter_bug&keywords=&maketemplate=Remember%20values%20as%20bookmarkable%20template&op_sys=Linux&priority=normal&product=Fedora%20Core&rep_platform=All&short_desc=Describe%20problem%2C%20fix%2C%20or%20request%20for%20release%20notes&version=devel&GoAheadAndLogIn=Login">
+ <!ENTITY BUG-URL
"https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Fedora%20Documentation&op_sys=Linux&target_milestone=---&bug_status=NEW&version=devel&component=release-notes&rep_platform=All&priority=normal&bug_severity=normal&assigned_to=relnotes%40fedoraproject.org&cc=&estimated_time_presets=0.0&estimated_time=0.0&bug_file_loc=http%3A%2F%2F&short_desc=summarize%20bug%20or%20enhancement%20here&comment=Description%20of%20problem%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AVersion-Release%20number%20of%20selected%20component%20%28if%20applicable%29%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AHow%20reproducible%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0ASteps%20to%20Reproduce&p!
ercnt;3A%0D%0A1.%0D%0A2.%0D%0A3.%0D%0A%20%20%0D%0AActual%20results%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AExpected%20results%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AAdditional%20info%3A&status_whiteboard=&keywords=&issuetrackers=&dependson=&blocked=151189%2C%20168083&ext_bz_id=0&ext_bz_bug_id=&data=&description=&contenttypemethod=list&contenttypeselection=text%2Fplain&contenttypeentry=&maketemplate=Remember%20values%20as%20bookmarkable%20template&form_name=enter_bug">
<!-- Pre-filled bz -->
-<!ENTITY TINY-BUG-URL "http://tinyurl.com/al5g4">
+<!ENTITY TINY-BUG-URL "http://tinyurl.com/byvk2">
]>
<article id="index" lang="en" arch="x86;x86_64;ppc"
os="test;final">
Index: hardware-reqs-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/hardware-reqs-en.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- hardware-reqs-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000 1.1
+++ hardware-reqs-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.2
@@ -230,14 +230,11 @@
<listitem>
<para>
<!--<remark os="test">(ppc)</remark> --> &FC;
&LOCALVER;
- supports only the <quote>New World</quote> generation of
- <trademark class="registered">Apple</trademark> Power
- Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards. It also supports the
- 64-bit G5 processor and, POWER processors in <trademark
- class="registered">IBM</trademark>
- <trademark>eServer</trademark>
<trademark>pSeries</trademark>.
- Currently 32-bit <trademark class="registered">IBM</trademark>
- <trademark>RS/6000</trademark> machines are not supported.
+ supports only the <quote>New World</quote> generation of Apple
+ Power Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards. It also supports
+ the 64-bit G5 processor and, POWER processors in IBM eServer
+ pSeries. Currently 32-bit IBM RS/6000 machines are not
+ supported.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
Index: install-notes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/install-notes-en.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- install-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2
+++ install-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3
@@ -59,88 +59,90 @@
RAM.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- </section>
- <para>
- The DVD or first CD of the installation set of &FC; is set to be
- bootable on supported hardware. In addition, bootable CD images
- can be found in the <filename>images/</filename> directory of the
- DVD or first CD. These will behave differently according to the
- hardware:
- </para>
- <variablelist>
- <title>Boot Image Behavior by Hardware</title>
+ <para>
+ The DVD or first CD of the installation set of &FC; is set to be
+ bootable on supported hardware. In addition, bootable CD images
+ can be found in the <filename>images/</filename> directory of
+ the DVD or first CD. These will behave differently according to
+ the hardware:
+ </para>
+ <variablelist>
+ <title>Boot Image Behavior by Hardware</title>
<varlistentry>
<term>Apple Macintosh </term>
- <listitem>
- <para>The bootloader should automatically boot the appropriate
- 32-bit or 64-bit installer. Power management support,
- including sleep and backlight level management, is present
- in the <filename>apmud</filename> package, which is in &FEX;.
- &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default for yum. Following
- installation, <filename>apmud</filename> can be installed by
- running the command <command>yum install apmud</command>
- in a terminal.
- </para>
- </listitem>
- </varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>64-bit IBM eServer pSeries (POWER4/POWER5)</term>
- <listitem>
- <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, the bootloader
- (<command>yaboot</command>) should automatically boot the
- 64-bit installer.
- </para>
- </listitem>
- </varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>32-bit CHRP (IBM RS/6000 and others)</term>
- <listitem>
- <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, select the
- <filename>linux32</filename> boot image at the
- <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt to start the 32-bit installer.
- Otherwise, the 64-bit installer is started, which does not
- work.</para>
- </listitem>
- </varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>Genesi Pegasos II</term>
- <listitem>
- <para>As of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;, firmware with full support
- for ISO9660 file systems is not yet released for the
- Pegasos. However, the network boot image can be used. At
- the OpenFirmware prompt, enter the command: </para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>The bootloader should automatically boot the
+ appropriate 32-bit or 64-bit installer. Power management
+ support, including sleep and backlight level management,
+ is present in the <filename>apmud</filename> package,
+ which is in &FEX;. &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default
+ for yum. Following installation,
+ <filename>apmud</filename> can be installed by running the
+ command <command>yum install apmud</command> in a
+ terminal.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>64-bit IBM eServer pSeries (POWER4/POWER5)</term>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, the
+ bootloader (<command>yaboot</command>) should
+ automatically boot the 64-bit installer.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>32-bit CHRP (IBM RS/6000 and others)</term>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, select the
+ <filename>linux32</filename> boot image at the
+ <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt to start the 32-bit installer.
+ Otherwise, the 64-bit installer is started, which does not
+ work.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>Genesi Pegasos II</term>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>As of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;, firmware with full support
+ for ISO9660 file systems is not yet released for the
+ Pegasos. However, the network boot image can be used. At
+ the OpenFirmware prompt, enter the command:
+ </para>
<screen>
<command>boot cd: /images/netboot/ppc32.img</command>
</screen>
- <para>
- You will also need to configure OpenFirmware on the Pegasos
- manually to make the installed &FC; system bootable. To do
- this, you need to set the <envar>boot-device</envar> and
- <envar>boot-file</envar> environment variables
- appropriately.
- </para>
- </listitem>
- </varlistentry>
- <varlistentry>
- <term>Network booting</term>
- <listitem>
- <para>There are combined images containing the installer
- kernel and ramdisk in the images/netboot/ directory of the
- install tree. These are intended for network booting with
- TFTP, but can be used in many ways.
- </para>
- <para>
- The command <command>yaboot</command> supports tftp
- booting for IBM eServer pSeries and Apple Macintosh.
- &FED; recommends using yaboot over the netboot images.
- </para>
+ <para>
+ You will also need to configure OpenFirmware on the
+ Pegasos manually to make the installed &FC; system
+ bootable. To do this, you need to set the
+ <envar>boot-device</envar> and <envar>boot-file</envar>
+ environment variables appropriately.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term>Network booting</term>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>There are combined images containing the installer
+ kernel and ramdisk in the images/netboot/ directory of the
+ install tree. These are intended for network booting with
+ TFTP, but can be used in many ways.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ The command <command>yaboot</command> supports tftp
+ booting for IBM eServer pSeries and Apple Macintosh. &FED;
+ recommends using yaboot over the netboot images.
+ </para>
</listitem>
- </varlistentry>
- </variablelist>
+ </varlistentry>
+ </variablelist>
+ </section>
</section>
<section>
<title>Anaconda Notes</title>
-
+
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
Index: multimedia-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/multimedia-en.xml,v
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--- multimedia-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2
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@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
playback or recording, because the MP3 and MPEG (DVD) formats
are patented, and the patent owners have not provided the
necessary licenses. For more information, refer to <xref
- linkend="sn-multimedia-exluded"/>.
+ linkend="sn-multimedia-excluded"/>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
Index: overview-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/overview-en.xml,v
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--- overview-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000 1.1
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@@ -1,5 +1,13 @@
<section id="sn-overview">
<title>Overview of This Release</title>
+ <caution>
+ <title>Information Out-of-Date</title>
+ <para>
+ The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO;
+ &DISTROVER;
+ </para>
+ </caution>
+<!--
<para>
The following list includes brief summaries of some of the more
significant aspects of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;:
@@ -69,10 +77,6 @@
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
-<!-- <remark os="test">%%% <ulink
-
url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136251&quo...
- %%%</remark>-->
-
<para>
&SEL; — This release includes coverage for 80 new
daemons by the targeted policy. There are changes to the
@@ -543,42 +547,6 @@
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <!--
- <note>
- <remark os="test">%%% <ulink
- url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136774&quo...
- %%%</remark>
- <title>Note</title>
- <para>
- VMware WS 4.5.2 is known to work on &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; after
- the following workarounds are used:</para>
-
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>You must upgrade the kernel modules and configuration
- using the unofficial <filename>vmware-any-any-*</filename>
- toolkit available from:</para>
-
- <remark os="test">%%% <ulink
-
url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=137378&quo...
- %%%</remark>
-
- <para><ulink
-
url="http://platan.vc.cvut.cz/ftp/pub/vmware/">http://platan.vc.cvut.cz/ftp/pub/vmware/</ulink></para>
-
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>After <filename>vmware-config.pl</filename> is run and the
- VMware modules are loaded, the following command creates the
- <filename>/sys/class/*</filename> nodes needed for
- udev:</para>
-
- <para><command>cp -rp /dev/vm*
- /etc/udev/devices/</command></para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
- </note>
-->
</section>
<!--
Index: package-movement-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-movement-en.xml,v
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--- package-movement-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2
+++ package-movement-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3
@@ -1044,18 +1044,14 @@
<section>
<title>Notes</title>
<para>
- system-config-mouse configuration utility has been dropped in this
- release because synaptic and 3 button mouse configuration is being
- done automatically and serial mice are not supported (<emphasis
- role='strong'>copied to <ulink
- url='/Docs/Beats/Desktop'>Docs/Beats/Desktop</ulink>
- </emphasis> - OK?)
+ <application>system-config-mouse</application> configuration
+ utility has been dropped in this release because synaptic and 3
+ button mouse configuration is being done automatically and serial
+ mice are not supported.
</para>
<para>
Screensavers not installed by default anymore? Explain
- why and provide commands to install them (<emphasis
- role='strong'>copied to <ulink
- url='/Docs/Beats/Desktop'>Docs/Beats/Desktop</ulink>
+ why and provide commands to install them.
</emphasis>)
</para>
<!-- FIXME
Index: package-notes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-notes-en.xml,v
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--- package-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2
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@@ -36,8 +36,14 @@
have undergone significant changes for &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;. For
easier access, they are generally organized using the same groups
used in Anaconda.
- </para>
-
+ </para
+ <caution>
+ <title>Information Out-of-Date</title>
+ <para>
+ The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO;
+ &DISTROVER;
+ </para>
+ </caution>
<section id="sn-basic-components">
<title>Basic Components</title>
<para>
Index: splash-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/splash-en.xml,v
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--- splash-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2
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@@ -39,11 +39,13 @@
Refer to these webpages to find out more information about &FED;:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
+<!-- FIXME Return when the section is updated
<listitem>
<para>
<xref linkend="sn-new-in-fc"/>
</para>
</listitem>
+-->
<listitem>
<para>
<xref linkend="sn-intro"/> — Technical release notes