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[Tom Callaway]

To replace the old placeholder text:

FIXME: This is not correct wording. Fedora Community is a place where
Fedora package maintainers can collaborate on building and maintaining
their packages. Logging into your Fedora account in Fedora Community
allows you to keep up with your packages and to keep track of your
friends’ packages as well.

I propose:

Fedora Community provides a window into the Fedora distribution,
leveraging the power of Fedora's Account System, Bodhi, Bugzilla, Koji,
and PackageDB into a single user-friendly website. Built entirely with
Free Software such as Moksha and TurboGears 2, Fedora Community is
designed to simplify Fedora workflows and bring transparency to Fedora
processes.

Thoughts?

~spot

[Adam Miller]

On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 1:03 PM, Tom "spot" Callaway
<tcallawa(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote:
>  To replace the old placeholder text:
>
>  FIXME: This is not correct wording. Fedora Community is a place where
>  Fedora package maintainers can collaborate on building and maintaining
>  their packages. Logging into your Fedora account in Fedora Community
>  allows you to keep up with your packages and to keep track of your
>  friends’ packages as well.
>
>  I propose:
>
>  Fedora Community provides a window into the Fedora distribution,
>  leveraging the power of Fedora's Account System, Bodhi, Bugzilla, Koji,
>  and PackageDB into a single user-friendly website. Built entirely with
>  Free Software such as Moksha and TurboGears 2, Fedora Community is
>  designed to simplify Fedora workflows and bring transparency to Fedora
>  processes.
>
>  Thoughts?
>
>  ~spot 
I like it! Kudos Spot.

-Adam


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[Luke Macken]

On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 02:03:49PM -0400, Tom spot Callaway wrote:
>  To replace the old placeholder text:
>  
>  FIXME: This is not correct wording. Fedora Community is a place where
>  Fedora package maintainers can collaborate on building and maintaining
>  their packages. Logging into your Fedora account in Fedora Community
>  allows you to keep up with your packages and to keep track of your
>  friends’ packages as well.
>  
>  I propose:
>  
>  Fedora Community provides a window into the Fedora distribution,
>  leveraging the power of Fedora's Account System, Bodhi, Bugzilla, Koji,
>  and PackageDB into a single user-friendly website. Built entirely with
>  Free Software such as Moksha and TurboGears 2, Fedora Community is
>  designed to simplify Fedora workflows and bring transparency to Fedora
>  processes.
>  
>  Thoughts? 
Looks good to me!