[Design-team] another wallpaprt with nautilus

[Onyeibo Oku]

Well, the three aren't that abstract either (except elements on the elephant sample & floating castle). It all depends on the amount of steampunk-ness involved.

I think the problem with this image is not the concept but the finishing. Water and the associated caustics is something that takes dedication and time to master. This is a huge undertaking that demands 
encouragement on the part of the critics.

I believe in this art. Keep it going.

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-----Original Message-----
From: Elad <el.il at doom.co.il>
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Date: Sat, 2 Jul 2011 09:24:29 
To: Fedora Design Team<design-team at lists.fedoraproject.org>
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Subject: Re: [Design-team] another wallpaprt with nautilus

2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy at fedoraproject.org>:
> On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
>> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest at gmail.com> wrote:
>> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
>> > material of water
>> > This is result :
>> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>>
>> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
>
> Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
> seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
> too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
> Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
> Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
> his plans for future iterations.
>
> Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
>
> Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
> some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
> other's work!
>
> ¬m
>
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I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough
in my opinion.
Great 3D though.

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-Elad Alfassa.
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