Workstation text on Fedora.next website

[Paul W. Frields]

Hi WG folks,

The following PNG contains the current text on the next-gen website.
This is material the Marketing and Websites teams and I worked on,
presented for your feedback.(*)

https://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/images/workstation-page-201411121143.png

There are several immediate questions for the WG to address:

(1) Is the text description of the product acceptable?  If not,
specifically what changes are needed to make it so?

(2) Is the set of included features acceptable?  If not, specifically
what changes are needed to make it so?


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(*) To see the work-in-progress site in action, follow this procedure:
    https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/How_to_fix_bugs_on_the_Fedora_Project_website
    Specifically you'll want to git-checkout the 'getfedora' branch
    and test the getfedora.org folder.

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