release-notes desktop-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 development-tools-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 entertainment-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora.css, 1.2, 1.3 file-servers-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 i18n-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 install-notes-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 kernel-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 multimedia-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 project-overview-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Nov 23 05:38:33 UTC 2005


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8043

Modified Files:
	desktop-en.xml development-tools-en.xml entertainment-en.xml 
	fedora.css file-servers-en.xml i18n-en.xml 
	install-notes-en.xml kernel-en.xml multimedia-en.xml 
	project-overview-en.xml 
Log Message:
Past the kernel beat, in alpha order, snapshot of what has been updated from the wiki for fc5test1.


Index: desktop-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/desktop-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- desktop-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.2
+++ desktop-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -3,70 +3,88 @@
   <itemizedlist>
     <title>Notes</title>
     <listitem>
-      <para>GNOME 2.12 and KDE 3.4.2 Major highlight
+      <para>GNOME 2.12 and KDE 3.4.2 are included in &FC; &FCVER;.
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>The current test release has GNOME 2.12.1, together with
-	some previews of technology from the forthcoming GNOME 2.14:
+      <para>This test release has GNOME 2.12.1, together with some
+	previews of technology from the forthcoming GNOME 2.14. Feedback
+	on these packages is especially appreciated.
       </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>gnome-power-manager: brings the Hardware Abstraction
-	    Layer to the world of laptop batteries and UPS units - these
-	    things should "Just Work", with a simple UI  (naturally, in
-	    a test release, they might not)
+          <para><filename>gnome-power-manager</filename>:
+	    <application>GNOME Power Manager </application> is a session
+	    daemon for the GNOME desktop environment that makes it easy
+	    to manage power on your laptop or desktop system. It takes
+	    advantage of HAL (which provides a hardware abstraction
+	    layer) and DBUS (Inter Process Communication software)
+	    written and maintained by &FC; developers.
 	  </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>gnome-screensaver: giving a fresh UI to screensavers and
-	    the <guilabel>Lock Screen</guilabel> dialog
+          <para><filename>gnome-screensaver</filename>: Provides a
+	    integrated user interface to screensavers and the lock
+	    screen dialog.
 	  </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Memory optimizations in the fontconfig and
-	    shared-mime-info packages (these now use shared
-	    memory-mapped caches for this data).  Both of these caches
-	    are still somewhat experimental.
+          <para>Memory optimizations in the
+	    <filename>fontconfig</filename> and
+	    <filename>shared-mime-info</filename> packages.  These now
+	    use shared memory-mapped caches for this data.
 	  </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
-  <para>
-    Test feedback on these experimental packages is especially
-    appreciated.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-    GNOME 2.12 has removed the terminal option from the desktop root
-    menu. nautilus-open-terminal in Fedora Extras repository provides a
-    enhanced replacement. It is also mentioned in the GNOME 2.12 release
-    notes itself but we might highlight it since the package is provided
-    with the extras repository.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-    Screensavers not installed by default anymore. Should explain why
-    and provide commands to install them.
-  </para>
-  <para>MCS SELinux is in rawhide. Major highlight
-    (<emphasis>tentative</emphasis> - not sure about classification of
-    this change)
-  </para>
-  <caution>
-    <title>OpenOffice and upgrading from test releases</title>
-    <para>
-      If you choose to go counter to the recommendation to <emphasis
-	role='strong'>not</emphasis> upgrade from a previous test
-      release, you may encounter a problem with <ulink
-	url='/OpenOffice'>OpenOffice</ulink> following the upgrade.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      To resolve this, you must do the following command <emphasis
-	role='strong'>before</emphasis> doing the upgrade:
-    </para>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>GNOME 2.12 has removed the
+	<guimenuitem>terminal</guimenuitem> option from the desktop
+	context menu. The package
+	<filename>nautilus-open-terminal</filename> in &FEX;
+	repository provides an enhanced replacement for those who require
+	it. You can install it using the following command:
+      </para>
 <screen>
-<command>rm -rf /usr/lib/openoffice.org*/share/template/*/wizard/bitmap</command>
+<command>yum install nautilus-open-terminal</command>
 </screen>
-  </caution>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>Only the blank screensavers is installed by default, since
+      &FC; 4.
+      </para>
+      <para>
+	The primary issue is that some screensavers are known to not
+	work correctly or abruptly terminate the graphical interface.
+	This is particularly true for some of the OpenGL animated ones
+	provided within <filename></filename>xscreensaver-gl-extras
+	package.
+      </para>
+      <para>
+	In addition, the material content of the screensavers is
+	sometimes controversial or causes strong reactions.  It is
+	better, for the user experience, to not be surprised by the
+	nature of the screensavers.
+      </para>
+      <para>
+	Users who want the screensavers package can install it using the following
+	command.
+      </para>
+<screen>
+<command>yum install xscreensaver-extras xscreensaver-gl-extras</command>
+</screen>
+    </listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
+  <note>
+    <title>Mouse configuration utility has changed</title>
+    <para>
+      The configuration utility
+      <application>system-config-mouse</application> has been dropped
+      from this release since synaptic and 3 button mouse configuration
+      is being done automatically during installation. Serial mice are
+      not formally supported in &FC; anymore.
+    </para>
+  </note>
 </section>
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Index: development-tools-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/development-tools-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- development-tools-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.2
+++ development-tools-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -9,11 +9,39 @@
 
 ]>
 -->
-<!-- Content commented out, no update performed by beat writer yet.
 <section id="sn-devel">
   <title>
     Development Tools
   </title>
+  <section id="sn-java-development">
+    <title>Java-like Environment</title>
+    <para>A Java-like free and open source environment is available
+      within the &FC; &FCVER; release.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      It has three components: GNU Java runtime
+      (<filename>libgcj</filename>), the Eclipse Java compiler
+      (<command>ecj</command>), and a set of wrappers and links
+      (<filename>java-gcj-compat</filename>) that present the runtime
+      and compiler to the user in the same way as other Java
+      environments are presented.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      Several major software packages such as Openoffice.org Base,
+      Eclipse, and Apache Tomcat, as well as several other Java software
+      packages included in this release, are compatible with this
+      environment.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      For more information, refer to the FAQ:
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      <ulink
+	url='http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/JavaFAQ'>http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/JavaFAQ</ulink>
+    </para>
+  </section>
+
+<!-- Content commented out, no update performed by beat writer yet.
   <section id="sn-devel-gcc">
     <title>GCC Compiler Collection</title>
     <para>
@@ -176,8 +204,9 @@
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
-</section>
 -->
+</section>
+
 
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Index: entertainment-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/entertainment-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- entertainment-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.1
+++ entertainment-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   <title>Games and Entertainment</title>
   <para>
     &FC; and &FEX; provide a selection of games that cover a variety of
-    genres.  By default, &FC;includes a small package of games for GNOME
+    genres.  By default, &FC; includes a small package of games for GNOME
     (called <filename>gnome-games</filename>).  For a list of other
     games that are available for installation through
     <command>yum</command>, open a terminal and enter the following


Index: fedora.css
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/fedora.css,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora.css	25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora.css	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -132,3 +132,7 @@
 	/* prevent inheritance */
 	margin-bottom: 0em;
 }
+
+p.title	{
+	text-align: center;
+}


Index: file-servers-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/file-servers-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- file-servers-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.2
+++ file-servers-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -24,12 +24,18 @@
       <title><filename>netatalk</filename></title>
       <para>
 	&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; includes version 2 of Netatalk.
-	<emphasis>Upgrading from Netatalk version 1 to version 2 may
-	  result in data loss</emphasis>.    Version 2 of Netatalk uses
-	a different method to store file resource forks from the
-	previous version, and may require a different file name encoding
-	scheme.  Please read the documentation and plan your migration
-	before upgrading.
+      </para>
+      <caution>
+	<title>Take care when upgrading Netatalk versions</title>
+	<para>
+	  Upgrading from Netatalk version 1 to version 2 may result in
+	  data loss.
+	</para>
+      </caution>
+      <para>Version 2 of Netatalk uses a different method to store file
+	resource forks from the previous version, and may require a
+	different file name encoding scheme.  Read the documentation and
+	plan your migration before upgrading.
       </para>
       <para>
 	Upgrade information is available directly from the Netatalk


Index: i18n-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/i18n-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- i18n-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.1
+++ i18n-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.2
@@ -9,100 +9,13 @@
       This section includes information related to the support of
       various languages under &DISTRO;.
     </para>
-    <section>
-      <title>The IIIMF Input System</title>
+    <note>
+      <title>IIIMF replaced</title>
       <para>
-	IIIMF is the Internet/Intranet Input Method Framework.  In &FC;
-	&LOCALVER; the <filename>iiimf</filename> package is updated to
-	version 12.2.
+	SCIM has replaced IIIMF in Fedora Core in this
+	release.
       </para>
-      <variablelist>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>File Path Changes</term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      The names and locations of some files in the
-	      <filename>iiimf</filename> packages have changed.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      The IIIMF server has been renamed from
-	      <filename>/usr/sbin/htt</filename> to
-	      <filename>/usr/bin/iiimd</filename>, and the XIM bridge
-	      client renamed from <filename>httx</filename> to
-	      <filename>iiimx</filename>. The
-	      <filename>init.d</filename> script name has not changed:
-	      it is still called <filename>iiim</filename>. All the
-	      global system configuration files are now located under
-	      <filename>/etc/iiim/</filename>.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      Language Engine (LE) developers should note that LE
-	      modules and their data now live under
-	      <filename>${libdir}/iiim/le/<filename>&lt;LE_NAME&gt;</filename>/</filename>, 
-	      while runtime data is stored under
-	      <filename>/var/lib/iiim/le/<replaceable>&lt;LE_NAME&gt;</replaceable>/</filename>.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      For more information on the exact path and file location
-	      changes, please refer to Fedora IIIMF FAQ:
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="http://www.fedora.redhat.com/projects/i18n/iiimf-faq.html">http://www.fedora.redhat.com/projects/i18n/iiimf-faq.html</ulink>.
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>Hotkeys</term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      Trigger keys, such as
-	      <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Space</keycap></keycombo> 
-	      used to activate Input Methods, are now configurable with
-	      the command-line tool <command>iiimf-le-tools</command>.
-	      This feature is only supported by GTK2 applications
-	      currently.  For other applications using XIM the trigger
-	      key can be changed using an X resource.  Refer to the
-	      IIIMF FAQ at <ulink
-		url="http://www.fedora.redhat.com/projects/i18n/iiimf-faq.html">http://www.fedora.redhat.com/projects/i18n/iiimf-faq.html</ulink> 
-	      for more details on how to change trigger hotkeys.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      Note that the keyname refers to the X key symbol name. For
-	      example, if you want to activate with
-	      <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>@</keycap></keycombo>, 
-	      you need to specify '&lt;Control&gt;at' as the keyname not
-	      '&lt;Control&gt;@'.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      The per-user configuration of hotkeys does not work
-	      currently with &SEL; in enforcing mode due to lack of
-	      &SEL; policy.  In this case, the hotkey can only be
-	      changed in the system-wide configuration.
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>Qt Support</term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      A Qt immodule for <filename>iiimf</filename> is now
-	      included.  This immodule works but lacks a status window
-	      and is considered experimental.  Therefore, the default
-	      for Qt applications is to continue using XIM for IIMF
-	      input.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      If you wish to try the immodule in a Qt application, first
-	      install the <filename>iiimf-qt</filename> package, start
-	      the application, then click mouse button-3 in an input
-	      area and select <guimenuitem>iiimqcf</guimenuitem> from
-	      the <guisubmenu>Select Input Method</guisubmenu>' submenu.
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-      </variablelist>
-    </section>
+    </note>
   </section>
 </section>
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Index: install-notes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/install-notes-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- install-notes-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000	1.3
+++ install-notes-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -8,16 +8,17 @@
   <note>
     <title>Note</title>
     <para>
-      If you intend to download the &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; DVD ISO
-      image, keep in mind that not all file downloading tools can
-      accommodate files larger than 2GB in size.  For example,
-      <command>wget</command> will exit with a <computeroutput>File size
-	limit exceeded</computeroutput> error.
+      If you intend to download the &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; DVD ISO image,
+      keep in mind that not all file downloading tools can accommodate
+      files larger than 2GiB in size.  For example,
+      <command>wget</command> before version 1.9.1.16 in exits with a
+      <computeroutput>File size limit exceeded</computeroutput> error.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The <command>curl</command> and <command>ncftpget</command>
-      file downloading tools do not have this limitation, and can
-      successfully download files larger than 2GB.
+      The <command>wget</command> version 1.9.1-16 and lter,
+      <command>curl</command> and <command>ncftpget</command> file
+      downloading tools do not have this limitation, and can
+      successfully download files larger than 2GiB.
     </para>
     <para>
       Bittorrent is another method for downloading large files.  For
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@
   </note>
   <section id="sn-install-notes-ppc">
     <title>PPC Installation Notes</title>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-ppc-hardware-reqs">
       <title>PPC Hardware Requirements</title>
       <para>
 	This section lists the minimum PowerPC (PPC) hardware needed
@@ -42,8 +43,9 @@
 	  <para>Minimum: PowerPC G3 / POWER4 </para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; supports only the “New World” generation
-	    of Apple Power Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards.
+	  <para>&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; supports only the “New World”
+	    generation of <trademark class="trade">Apple</trademark>
+	    Power Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
@@ -51,11 +53,11 @@
 	    RS/6000, and Genesi Pegasos II machines.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Recommended for text-mode: 233 MHz G3 or better, 64MB
+	  <para>Recommended for text-mode: 233 MHz G3 or better, 64MiB
 	    RAM.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Recommended for graphical: 400 MHz G3 or better, 128MB
+	  <para>Recommended for graphical: 400 MHz G3 or better, 128MiB
 	    RAM.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -63,23 +65,22 @@
 	The DVD or first CD of the installation set of &FC; is set to be
 	bootable on supported hardware. In addition, bootable CD images
 	can be found in the <filename>images/</filename> directory of
-	the DVD or first CD. These will behave differently according to
-	the hardware:
+	the DVD or first CD. These behave differently according to the
+	hardware:
       </para>
       <variablelist>
 	<title>Boot Image Behavior by Hardware</title>
 	<varlistentry>
 	  <term>Apple Macintosh </term>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>The bootloader should automatically boot the
-	      appropriate 32-bit or 64-bit installer.  Power management
-	      support, including sleep and backlight level management,
-	      is present in the <filename>apmud</filename> package,
-	      which is in &FEX;. &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default
-	      for yum. Following installation,
-	      <filename>apmud</filename> can be installed by running the
-	      command <command>yum install apmud</command> in a
-	      terminal.
+	    <para>The bootloader automatically boots the appropriate
+	      32-bit or 64-bit installer.  Power management support,
+	      including sleep and backlight level management, is present
+	      in the <filename>apmud</filename> package, which is in
+	      &FEX;. &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default for yum.
+	      Following installation, <filename>apmud</filename> can be
+	      installed by running the command <command>yum install
+		apmud</command> in a terminal.
 	    </para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
@@ -87,8 +88,8 @@
 	  <term>64-bit IBM eServer pSeries (POWER4/POWER5)</term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, the
-	      bootloader (<command>yaboot</command>) should
-	      automatically boot the 64-bit installer.
+	      bootloader (<command>yaboot</command>) automatically boots
+	      the 64-bit installer.
 	    </para>
 	  </listitem>        
 	</varlistentry>
@@ -114,11 +115,11 @@
 <command>boot cd: /images/netboot/ppc32.img</command> 
 </screen>          
 	    <para>
-	      You will also need to configure OpenFirmware on the
-	      Pegasos manually to make the installed &FC; system
-	      bootable. To do this, you need to set the
-	      <envar>boot-device</envar> and <envar>boot-file</envar>
-	      environment variables appropriately.
+	      You also need to configure OpenFirmware on the Pegasos
+	      manually to make the installed &FC; system bootable. To do
+	      this, you need to set the <envar>boot-device</envar> and
+	      <envar>boot-file</envar> environment variables
+	      appropriately.
 	    </para>
 	  </listitem>        
 	</varlistentry>
@@ -126,12 +127,13 @@
 	  <term>Network booting</term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>There are combined images containing the installer
-	      kernel and ramdisk in the images/netboot/ directory of the
+	      kernel and ramdisk in the
+	      <filename>images/netboot/</filename> directory of the
 	      install tree. These are intended for network booting with
 	      TFTP, but can be used in many ways.
 	    </para>
 	    <para>
-	      The command <command>yaboot</command> supports tftp
+	      The command <command>yaboot</command> supports TFTP
 	      booting for IBM eServer pSeries and Apple Macintosh. &FED;
 	      recommends using yaboot over the netboot images.
 	    </para>
@@ -140,7 +142,7 @@
       </variablelist>
     </section>
   </section>
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-anaconda-notes">
     <title>Anaconda Notes</title>
     
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -175,10 +177,6 @@
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem arch="x86">
-<!--	<remark os="test">%%% <ulink
-	    url="http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=137654">http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=137654</ulink> 
-	  %%%</remark>
--->
 	<para>
 	  <!-- <remark os="test">(x86)</remark> --> Memory testing may be
 	  performed prior to installing &DISTRO; by entering
@@ -201,16 +199,70 @@
 	<para>
 	  &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; supports graphical FTP and HTTP
 	  installations.  However, due to the necessity of containing
-	  the installer image in RAM, only systems with more than 128MB
+	  the installer image in RAM, only systems with more than 128MiB
 	  of RAM (or systems booted from CD-ROM 1, which contains the
 	  installer image) can use the graphical installer.  Systems
-	  with 128MB or less will continue to use the text-based
+	  with 128MiB of RAM or less must continue to use the text-based
 	  installer.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-installer-changes">
+    <title>Changes In The Installer</title>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Support has been added for <command>yum</command> as the
+	  dependancy solver backend for software packages has been
+	  added.  Additional repositories are expected to be supported
+	  during installation in a future release.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>In this release, the installer checks the hardware
+	  capability and installs either the uniprocessor or SMP
+	  (Symmetric Multi Processor) kernel, as appropriate. Previous
+	  releases installed both the variants and used the appropriate
+	  one as default.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Partition setting has been reworked to be more user
+	  friendly.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Remote logging via <command>syslog</command> is supported
+	  in this release.  To enable, pass
+	  <option>syslog=host:port</option> at the boot prompt.
+	  Specifying the port is optional.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Firewall/SELinux configuration has been moved to the final
+	  installation phase called
+	  <application>firstboot</application>.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Rendering of HTML pages during install is now done using
+	  the <command>gtkhtml</command> widget for better capability.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Kickstart has been refactored into its own package -
+	  <filename>pykickstart</filename> - containing parser and
+	  writers. As a result of this change, validation and extension
+	  of kickstart is now much easier.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Serial mice are no long formally supported in the
+	  installer nor in &FC;. </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+  </section>
+  <section id="sn-install-related-issues">
     <title>Installation-Related Issues</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -221,7 +273,6 @@
 	  the installation, and add the "<command>nofb</command>" option
 	  to the boot command line.
 	</para>
-
 	<note>
 	  <title>Note</title>
 	  <para>


Index: kernel-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/kernel-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- kernel-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000	1.2
+++ kernel-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.3
@@ -12,298 +12,258 @@
 ]>
 -->
 <section id="sn-kernel">
-  <title>
-    Linux Kernel
-  </title>
-  <section id="sn-kernel-lotsa">
+  <title>Linux Kernel</title>
+  <section id="sn-kernel-version">
     <title>Version</title>
     <para>
-      The distribution is based on the 2.6 series of the Linux kernel. &FC; may include
-      additional patches for improvements, bug fixes, or additional
-      features. For this reason, the &FC; kernel may not be
-      line-for-line equivalent to the vanilla<firstterm></firstterm> kernel from the
-      <ulink
-  url="http://www.kernel.org"><filename>kernel.org</filename></ulink>
+      This distribution is based on the 2.6 series of the Linux kernel.
+      &FC; may include patches for improvements, bug fixes, or
+      additional features. For this reason, the &FCl kernel may not be
+      line-for-line equivalent to the <firstterm>vanilla
+	kernel</firstterm> from the <ulink
+	url='http://www.kernel.org/'>http://www.kernel.org/</ulink>
       website.
     </para>
     <para>
-      You may obtain a list of any such patches by using the command on the &FC; package:
-    </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>rpm <parameter class="option">-qpl</parameter> <filename>kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.src.rpm</filename></command>
+      You may obtain a list of any such patches by using this command
+      on the &FC; package:</para>
+<screen>
+<command>rpm -qpl kernel-&lt;version>.src.rpm</command>
 </screen>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-kernel-flavors">
     <title>Kernel Flavors</title>
-    <para>
-      &FC; includes the following kernel builds:
-    </para>
+    <para>&FC; includes the following kernel builds: </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Native kernel, in both uniprocessor and
-	  <abbrev>SMP</abbrev> varieties. Configured sources are
-	  available in the
+	<para>Native kernel, in both uniprocessor and SMP (Symmetric
+	  Multi Processor) varieties. Configured sources are available
+	  in the
 	  <filename>kernel-devel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.<replaceable>arch</replaceable>.rpm</filename> 
-	  package.
-        </para>
+	  package. 
+	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Virtual kernel for use with the <application>Xen</application>
-	  emulator package. Configured sources are available in the
+	<para>Virtual kernel for use with the Xen emulator package.
+	  Configured sources are available in the
 	  <filename>kernel-xen0-devel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.<replaceable>arch</replaceable>.rpm</filename> 
-	  package.
-        </para>
+	  package. </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>
       Sources for both kernel flavors may be installed at the same time.
       The files are installed into the
-      <filename>/usr/src/kernels/<replaceable>version</replaceable>[-xen0]-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/</filename>
-      tree. Use the command:
-    </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>rpm <parameter class="option">-Uvh</parameter> <filename>kernel-devel[-xen0]-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.<replaceable>arch</replaceable>.rpm</filename></command>
-</screen>
-    <para>
+      <filename>/usr/src/kernels/<replaceable>version</replaceable>[-xen0]-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/</filename> 
+      tree.  Use the command <command>rpm -Uvh
+	kernel-devel[-xen0]-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.<replaceable>arch</replaceable>.rpm</command> 
       as appropriate.
     </para>
-    <tip>
-      <title>Following Generic Textbooks About the Linux Kernel</title>
+    <note> 
+      <title>No separate SMP kernel for x86_64</title>
       <para>
-        Many of the tutorials, examples, and textbooks about Linux
-	kernel development assume the kernel sources are installed under
-	the <filename>/usr/src/linux</filename> directory. If you make a
-	symbolic link, as shown below, you should be able to use those
-	learning materials with the &FC; packages. Install the
-	appropriate kernel sources, as shown earlier, and then:
+	The default kernels in x86_64 architecture provide the SMP
+	capability. There is no seperate SMP kernel available for this
+	architecture in &FC; &FCVER;.
       </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>ln <parameter class="option">-s</parameter> <filename>/usr/src/kernels/kernel-<replaceable>all-the-rest</replaceable></filename> <filename>/usr/src/linux</filename></command>
-</screen>
-    </tip>
+    </note>
   </section>
-  <!--
-  <tip>
-    <title>Using <command>yum</command> to Remove Kernel
-    Packages</title>
+  <section>
+    <title>Following Generic Textbooks</title>
     <para>
-      &FC; &LOCALVER; contains support for clustering systems using CMAN and GFS.
-      These kernels require assistance from some user-space packages.
-      These packages are not removed when using <command>rpm
-      -e</command> to remove older versions of the kernel packages.
+      Many of the tutorials, examples, and textbooks about Linux
+      kernel development assume the kernel sources are installed under
+      the <filename>/usr/src/linux/</filename> directory. If you make a symbolic
+      link, as shown below, you should be able to use those learning
+      materials with the &FC; packages. Install the appropriate
+      kernel sources, as shown earlier, and then do this:
     </para>
+<screen>
+<command>ln -s /usr/src/kernels/kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>-<replaceable>arch</replaceable> /usr/src/linux</command>
+</screen>
+  </section>
+  <section id="sn-kernel-dev">
+    <title>Preparing for Kernel Development</title>
     <para>
-      When using <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable> </command> to remove the kernel, you must also remove the assisting user-space packages.  You may wish to consider a dependency resolving tool such as <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable> </command>.
-      This automatically removes any dependent packages.
+      &FC; &FCVER; does not include the <filename>kernel-source</filename>
+      package provided by older versions. Instead, configured sources
+      are available as described in <xref linkend="sn-kernel-flavors"/>.
+      Users that require access to &FC; original kernel sources
+      can find them in the kernel <filename>.src.rpm</filename> package.
     </para>
-  </tip>
-  -->
-  <section id="sn-kernel-exploding">
-    <title>
-      Preparing for Kernel Development
-    </title>
     <para>
-      &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; does not include the
-      <filename>kernel-source</filename> package provided by older
-      versions. Instead, configured sources are available as described
-      in <xref
-  linkend="sn-kernel-flavors"/>. Users that require access to &FC;
-      original kernel sources can find them in the
-      <filename>kernel</filename> <filename>.src.rpm</filename> package.
       To create an exploded source tree from this file, perform the
       following steps:
     </para>
-    <important>
-    <title>These Instructions Refer to the Currently-running Kernel!</title>
-      <para>
-	To simplify the following directions, the assumption is that you
+    <tip>
+      <title>Instructions refer to currently-running kernel</title>
+	<para>
+	To simplify the following directions, it is assumed that you
 	want to configure the kernel sources to match your
-	currently-running kernel. In the steps below, you must
-	understand that the phrase
-	<replaceable>version</replaceable> refers to the kernel
-	version shown by this command:
+	currently-running kernel. In the steps below, the phrase
+	<replaceable>version</replaceable> refers to the kernel version
+	shown by the command  <command>uname -r</command>. 
       </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>uname <parameter class="option">-r</parameter></command>
-</screen>
-    </important>
-    <procedure id="sn-kernel-exploding-steps">
+    </tip>
+    <procedure>
       <step>
-        <para>
-          Obtain the
+	<para>
+	  Obtain the
 	  <filename>kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.src.rpm</filename> 
 	  file from one of the following sources:
-        </para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>The <filename>SRPMS/</filename> directory on the
-	      appropriate <wordasword>SRPMS</wordasword>
-	      <abbrev>CD</abbrev> <filename>ISO</filename> image.
-              </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>The FTP site where you got the kernel package.
-            </para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>By running the following command:
-            </para>
-<!-- FIXME up2date is sorta deprecated for FC, how to do this with yum? -->
-<screen width="56">
-<command>up2date <parameter class="option">--get-source</parameter> <filename>kernel</filename></command>
+	</para>
+	<itemizedlist>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>The SRPMS directory on the appropriate SRPMS CD iso
+	      image.
+	    </para>
+	  </listitem>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>The FTP site where you got the kernel package.
+	    </para>
+	  </listitem>
+	</itemizedlist>
+	<para>
+	  Install by running this command:
+	</para>
+<screen>
+<command>yum install yum-utils yumdownloader --source kernel</command>
 </screen>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
       </step>
       <step>
-        <para>
-          Install
+	<para>
+	  Install
 	  <filename>kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.src.rpm</filename> 
-	  using the command:
-        </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>rpm <parameter class="option">-Uvh</parameter> <filename>kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.src.rpm</filename></command>
-</screen>
-        <para>
-          This writes the <abbrev>RPM</abbrev> contents into
+	  using the command <command>rpm -Uvh
+	    kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>.src.rpm</command>.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  This writes the RPM contents into
 	  <filename>/usr/src/redhat/SOURCES</filename> and
 	  <filename>/usr/src/redhat/SPECS</filename>.
-        </para>
+	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
-        <para>
-          Prepare the kernel sources using the commands:
-        </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>cd <filename>/usr/src/redhat/SPECS</filename></command>
-<command>rpmbuild <parameter class="option">-bp --target $(arch)</parameter> <filename>kernel-2.6.spec</filename></command>
-</screen>
-        <para>
-          The kernel source tree is located in the
-	  <filename>/usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-</filename><replaceable>version</replaceable> 
+	<para>Prepare the kernel sources with these commands:
+	</para>
+<screen>
+<command>cd /usr/src/redhat/SPECS
+rpmbuild -bp --target $(arch) kernel-2.6.spec</command>
+</screen>
+	<para>
+	  The kernel source tree is then located in the
+	  <filename>/usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>/</filename> 
 	  directory. It is common practice to move the resulting
-	  <filename>linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename>
-	  directory to the <filename>/usr/src</filename> tree; while not
-	  strictly necessary, doing so matches you with the
-	  generally-available documentation.
-        </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>cd <filename>/usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename> <filename>/usr/src/</filename></command>
-<command>mv <filename>linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename> <filename>/usr/src/</filename></command>
-<command>cd <filename>/usr/src</filename></command>
-<command>ln <parameter class="option">-s</parameter> <filename>./linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename> <filename>linux</filename></command>
-<command>cd <filename>/usr/src/linux</filename></command>
+	  <filename>linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename> directory to the
+	  <filename>/usr/src/</filename> tree; while not strictly
+	  necessary, you can do this to match the generally-available kernel
+	  documentation.
+	</para>
+<screen>
+<command>cd /usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>
+mv linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable> /usr/src/
+cd /usr/src\
+ln -s ./linux-<replaceable>version</replaceable> linux
+cd /usr/src/linux</command>
 </screen>
       </step>
       <step>
-        <para>
-          The configurations for the specific kernels shipped in
-	  &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; are in the <filename>configs/</filename>
-	  directory. For example, the i686 SMP configuration file is
-	  named
+	<para>
+	  The configurations for the specific kernels shipped in &FC;
+	  are in the <filename>configs/</filename> directory. For
+	  example, the i686 SMP configuration file is named
 	  <filename>configs/kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable>-i686-smp.config</filename>. 
 	  Issue the following command to place the desired configuration
-	  file in the proper place for building:
-        </para>
-<screen width="56">
-<command>cp <filename>configs/<replaceable>desired-config-file</replaceable></filename> <filename>.config</filename></command>
-</screen>
-        <para>
-          You can also find the <filename>.config</filename> file that
+	  file in the proper place for building: <command>cp
+	    configs/<replaceable>desired-config-file</replaceable>
+	    .config</command>
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  You can also find the <filename>.config</filename> file that
 	  matches your current kernel configuration in the
-	  <filename>/lib/modules/</filename><replaceable>version</replaceable><filename>/build/.config</filename> 
+	  <filename>/lib/modules/<replaceable>version</replaceable>/build/.config</filename> 
 	  file.
-        </para>
+	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
-        <para>
-          Every kernel gets a name based on its version number. This is
-	  the value the <command>uname -r</command> command displays.
-	  The kernel name is defined by the first four lines of the
-	  kernel <filename>Makefile</filename>. To protect the innocent,
-	  the <filename>Makefile</filename> has been changed to generate
-	  a kernel with a different name from that of the running
-	  kernel. Before a module can be accepted by the running kernel,
-	  that module must have been compiled for a kernel with the
-	  correct name.  To do this, you must edit the kernel
-	  <filename>Makefile</filename>
-        </para>
-        <para>
-          For example, if the <command>uname -r</command> returns the
-	  string <systemitem
-	    class="osname">2.6.11-1.234_FC4</systemitem>, change the
-	  <systemitem class="macro">EXTRAVERSION</systemitem> definition
-	  from this:
-        </para>
-<screen width="60">
+	<para>
+	  Every kernel gets a name based on its version number. This is
+	  the value displayed by the command <command>uname
+	    -r</command>. The kernel name is defined by the first four
+	  lines of the kernel Makefile. To protect from mistakes, the
+	  Makefile has been changed to generate a kernel with a
+	  different name from that of the running kernel. Before a
+	  module can be accepted by the running kernel, that module must
+	  have been compiled for a kernel with the correct name. To do
+	  this, you must edit the kernel Makefile.
+	</para>
+    <para>For example, if <command>uname -r</command> returns the string
+      <computeroutput>2.6.11-1.234_FC4</computeroutput>, change the
+      <envar>EXTRAVERSION</envar> definition from this:
+    </para>
+<screen>
 EXTRAVERSION = -prep
 </screen>
-        <para>
+	<para>
 	  to this:
 	</para>
-<screen width="60">
+<screen>
 EXTRAVERSION = -1.234_FC4
 </screen>
-        <para>
-          That is, substitute everything from the final dash onward.
-        </para>
-      </step>
+	<para>This represents everything from the final dash onward in the
+	  package name.
+	</para>
+      </step> 
       <step>
-        <para>
-          Issue the following command:
-        </para>
-<screen width="56">
+	<para>
+	  Issue the following command:
+	</para>
+<screen>
 <command>make oldconfig</command>
 </screen>
-      </step>
+	<para>You can then proceed as usual. </para></step>
     </procedure>
-    <para>
-      You can then proceed as usual.
-    </para>
   </section>
-  <section id="sn-kernel-3rdparty">
+  <section id="sn-kernel-modules-building">
     <title>Building Only Kernel Modules</title>
     <para>
-      An exploded source tree is <emphasis>not</emphasis> required to
-      build a kernel module, such as your own device driver, against the
-      currently in-use kernel.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      For example, to build the <filename>foo.ko</filename> module,
-      create the following <filename>Makefile</filename> in the
+      An exploded source tree is not required to build a kernel module,
+      such as your own device driver, against the currently in-use
+      kernel. For example, to build the <filename>foo.ko</filename>
+      module, create the following <filename>Makefile</filename> in the
       directory containing the <filename>foo.c</filename> file:
     </para>
-<programlisting width="56">
+<screen>
 obj-m := foo.o
 
 KDIR  := /lib/modules/$(shell uname -r)/build
 PWD   := $(shell pwd)
 
-default:
-    $(MAKE) -C $(KDIR) M=$(PWD) modules
-</programlisting>
-      <para>
-      Issue the <command>make</command> command to build the
+ndefault:
+      $(MAKE) -C $(KDIR) M=$(PWD) modules
+</screen>
+    <para>Issue the <command>make</command> command to build the
       <filename>foo.ko</filename> module.
-    </para>
+</para>
   </section>
-  <section id="sn-kernel-coop">
+  <section id="kernel-user-space-depencies">
     <title>User Space Dependencies on the Kernel</title>
     <para>
-      &DISTRO; adds support for clustered systems. This requires a
-      special kernel that works in conjunction with some user-space
-      utilities, such as management daemons. Consequently, to remove
-      such a kernel, perhaps after an update, you
-      <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> simply use the <command>rpm -e
+      &PROD; &PRODVER; has support for clustered storage through the Red
+      Hat GFS file system. This requires a special kernel that works in
+      conjunction with some user-space utilities, such as management
+      daemons. Consequently, to remove such a kernel, perhaps after an
+      update, you cannot simply use the <command>rpm -e
 	kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable></command> command as
       in earlier distributions because these user space packages depend
-      on the kernel package. You may either list both the kernel package
-      and its user space dependent packages on the <command>rpm
-	-e</command> command, or you may wish to use the <command>yum
-	remove kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable></command>
-      command instead since <command>yum</command> automatically removes
-      dependent packages if necessary.
+      on the kernel package.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      You may either list both the kernel package and its user space
+      dependent packages on the <command>rpm -e</command> command, or
+      you may wish to use the <command>yum remove
+	kernel-<replaceable>version</replaceable></command> command
+      instead since <command>yum</command> automatically removes
+      dependent packages if necessary. 
     </para>
   </section>
 </section>


Index: multimedia-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/multimedia-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- multimedia-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000	1.3
+++ multimedia-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -69,12 +69,8 @@
     <para>
       Several programs are excluded from &FC; and &FEX; due to licensing
       issues.  These include programs that provide MP3 and DVD support,
-      Flash Player and Real Player.  Users who wish to use these
-      programs or restricted formats have to acquire additional
-      packages from third-party repositories.  Many of the multimedia
-      applications in the Fedora repositories support plugins, so
-      support for new formats can be easily added or removed.  For more
-      on this subject, please see:
+      Flash Player and Real Player.  For more on this subject, please
+      refer to:
     </para>
     <para>
       <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems</ulink>


Index: project-overview-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/project-overview-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- project-overview-en.xml	25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000	1.1
+++ project-overview-en.xml	23 Nov 2005 05:38:24 -0000	1.2
@@ -47,27 +47,35 @@
 	  Documentation Project
 	</para>
       </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-      To subscribe to any of these lists, send an email with the word
-      "subscribe" in the subject to
-      <computeroutput><replaceable>&lt;listname&gt;</replaceable>-request</computeroutput>
-      (where
-      <computeroutput><replaceable>&lt;listname&gt;</replaceable></computeroutput>
-      is one of the above list names.)
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      Alternately, you can subscribe through the Web interface:
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/">http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink>
-    </para>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
+	fedora-ambassadors-list at redehat.com &mdash; For community
+	members who represent the &PROJ; in public.
+      </para>
+    </listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
+  <para>
+    To subscribe to any of these lists, send an email with the word
+    "subscribe" in the subject to
+    <computeroutput><replaceable>&lt;listname&gt;</replaceable>-request</computeroutput>
+    (where
+    <computeroutput><replaceable>&lt;listname&gt;</replaceable></computeroutput>
+    is one of the above list names.)
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    Alternately, you can subscribe through the Web interface:
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/">http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink>
+  </para>
+  <!-- Aren't we quite past this?  Saving just in case we are not.
     <para>
       If you have subscribed in the past to rhl-list, rhl-beta-list,
       rhl-devel-list, or rhl-docs-list, your subscriptions have been
       retained.
     </para>
-    <para>
+  -->
+  <para>
       The &PROJ; also includes an IRC (Internet Relay Chat) channel.  IRC is
       a real-time, text-based form of communication.  With it, you can have
       conversations with multiple people in an open channel or chat with someone
@@ -88,7 +96,7 @@
     <para>
       In order to talk on the <filename>#fedora</filename> channel, you
       will need to register your nickname (<firstterm>nick</firstterm>).
-      Instructions are given when you <command>/join</command> the
+      Instructions are given when you first <command>/join</command> the
       channel.
     </para>
     <note>




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