Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19554/en
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
Log Message:
- Trivial content fixes.
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 5 Mar 2006 10:19:54 -0000 1.10
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 5 Mar 2006 11:20:22 -0000 1.11
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
<para>
By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
- permit only
+ permit only network browsing and
<indexterm>
<primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
<secondary>firewall configuration</secondary>
Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 5 Mar 2006 03:02:05 -0000 1.9
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 5 Mar 2006 11:20:22 -0000 1.10
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
<title>Core Network Services</title>
<para>
- All Fedora Core installations run the following network services:
+ All Fedora Core installation include the following network services:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -121,12 +121,17 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>
- The default installation also includes:
+ The default installation also provides:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
+ network file transfer through HTTP (HyperText Transfer Protocol)
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
printing through CUPS (Common UNIX Printing System)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -142,7 +147,7 @@
service to send reports and messages to the system administrator.
By default, the email, logging, and printing services do not
accept connections from other systems. &FED; installs the NFS
- sharing and VNC components without enabling those services.
+ sharing, HTTP, and VNC components without enabling those services.
</para>
<para>