Btrfs and SSSD in Fedora 13 feature profiles: Review

[Gerard Ryan]

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On 13/05/10 11:05, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> On Wed, May 12, 2010 at 07:04:57PM -0400, Gerard Ryan wrote:
>> On 12/05/10 13:12, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> As you might have noticed, the marketing team has been doing a few
>>> feature profiles covering various new features in Fedora 13,  the last
>>> ones remaining are one of Btrfs and SSSD
>>>
>>> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Btrfs_in_Fedora_13
>>>
>>> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SSSD_in_Fedora_13
>>>
>>> So, take a quick look and let me if you have any suggestions on
>>> improving it.  Documentation folks -  appreciate you review as well.  We
>>> would like to send it out to the press in a couple of days. 
>>>
>>> Rahul
>>
>> Hi Rahul,
>>
>> I read the Btrfs interview, and I noted the following:
>>
>> 1.
>> 'So right before doing a big yum update our plugin we'll take a snapshot
>> of the filesystem, now you have two copies of the filesystem, and then
>> yum does its update onto your original volume.'
>>
>> --I would suggest adding a comma after 'big yum update,' (for
>> readability) and change 'we'll' to 'will' ('we'll' seems to be a typo
>> there).
>>
>>
>> 2.
>> 'How many developers are working on Btrfs full time and from Red Hat?
>> What do they focus on?'
>>
>> --Either remove 'and' or say 'How many developers from Red Hat are
>> working on Btrfs full time?'
>>
>>
>> 3.
>> 'Is there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?'
>>
>> --Needs to be: 'Are there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not
>> at this point?'
>>
>>
>> I hope this has been helpful. Obviously there might be other things that
>> I missed also.
>>
>> Gerard.
> 
> Gerard,
> 
> If you have a Fedora account already, you can actually make these
> edits yourself.  The wonderful thing about a wiki is that it
> encourages collaboration like this directly on the document.  You
> don't need to ask for permission to make improvements.  And the
> changes you make are recorded in a history record, so if there's any
> problem, it's easy to find and correct it.
> 
> Thanks for participating and reviewing!
> 

Oh yeah, didn't think of that Paul, thanks! I'm still finding my way
around here! :)

Made those changes to the wiki, and a couple more I didn't see the first
time around!

Gerard.
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