commonbugs draft text for bug 1170803
Pete Travis
me at petetravis.com
Tue Dec 9 06:42:36 UTC 2014
On Dec 8, 2014 2:27 PM, "Chris Murphy" <lists at colorremedies.com> wrote:
>
> Let me know if there's a preferred way of doing this.
>
> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1170803#c21
>
> --
> Chris Murphy
> --
I like to get the expected behavior up front, then explain the
ramifications. Maybe it helps people who are just skimming retain the
info. ie:
"To make sure any extN filesystems that might be reused or resized are
healthy, the Fedora installer automatically performs a check on
filesystems it discovers. If this check takes a long time, perhaps because
of large, slow, or damaged filesystems, the installer may..."
Anyway, everyone has their own writing style. Your copy is clear and
concise.
Or, are you asking for it to be included in the RNs?
--Pete
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