Proposing fedora to govt dept

sriram vasudevan sreeram.vasudevan at gmail.com
Fri Aug 8 07:22:09 UTC 2008


Hi vidur,
Greetings
Once you are through your presentation, If can help you with corrections and
editing.And I suggest you to keep the major details such as the introduction
objectives very crisp and clear.In my view point you need to shuffle your
order of contents..I mean, Comp b/w linux and win should follow the
objective.And the benefits are actually a part of your "Why use Fedora".Try
to avoid redundancy.Use attractive sideheadings as the govt offices
generally pay heed to appearance as compared to the content comparatively.
good luck..If I may b of any help 2 u, feel free to drop me a mail.


2008/8/7 Vidur Mittal <vidurmittal at gmail.com>

> HI,
>
> I am trying to give presentation of FEDORA to few of the govt. deptt.. I am
> trying to make a presentation over fedora i want all the team to come
> forward and help in this regards.The points which i am thinking to include
> in presentation are as follows:
>
> 1. Objective
> 2. Benefits
> 3.Comparison between Windows and Linux
> 4.Comparison between different flavour of Unix
> 5.Why use fedora
> 6.A short introduction of redhat and fedora project
> 7.Help and support of fedora.
>
> Now i want every one to come and help me in this regards so that i can
> complete the presentation. Please also guide me that i have included all the
> point for the presentation.
> Thanks in advance
> --
> With Best Regards
> Vidur Mittal
> Meerut
>
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Regards

Sriram :-)
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