Query on Magazine post

[Trupti Kini]

Hi,

I have made the necessary alterations. Please let me know if anything else
is required.


*Regards,*
Trupti Kini
Research Assistant, FOSSEE
Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay
http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/

On Mon, Feb 9, 2015 at 8:48 PM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch at redhat.com> wrote:

>  On 02/08/2015 09:40 AM, Trupti Kini wrote:
>
> Hi,
>     I have posted the article for publishing. How long it usually takes
> for the review? I wanted to add images to the article but I din't find *Add
> media* option. Can anyone please guide me?
>
>
> *Regards, *
> Trupti Kini
>  Research Assistant, FOSSEE
> Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay
> http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/
>
>
>  Thanks for contributing to the Fedora Magazine, here are a few quick
> notes on your post:
>
> * Maybe tighten up the headline / title of the post a bit to make it more
> news-y. Something like:
> "Fedora community in Mumbai, India celebrates the Fedora 21 release" -- we
> have a global audience, so most won't know where or what "Homi Bhabha
> Centre for Science Education" is (i had to google it)
>
> * I'd probably open the article with a bit of filler about what a release
> party is. Maybe something like:
> "Every time a new release of Fedora becomes available, Fedora user
> communities around the world gather to share the new release with each
> other, upgrade their systems, and eat celebratory cake. In December, a
> release party was held at the..."
>
> * With the content under the opening paragraph, it is a little hard to
> follow if some of the statements about Fedora (GNOME, Openstack etc), were
> said by the speakers you call out, or if they are just statements about the
> release.
>
> * For an article like this, describing what the speakers talked about is
> good, but try not to get into too much detail. Some of the quotes you have
> there are good stuff to include too.
>
> cheers,
> ryanlerch
>
>
>
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