last minute review of release announcement?

[Jaroslav Reznik]

----- Original Message -----
> On 05/26/2015 09:33 AM, Matthew Miller wrote:
> > On Mon, May 25, 2015 at 07:31:30PM -0400, Chris Roberts wrote:
> >> I like it it covers the highlights of each of the releases. The only
> >> thing that looks out of place is the Fedora 22 graphic at the bottom.
> >> If it was me I would move that to the top, that way it captures the
> >> readers attention and then they keep on reading.
> > That's kind of a placeholder for the Fedora Magazine post, where it
> > _will_ be at the top (because that's how the theme works). I guess I
> > can move it in the wiki too.
> >
> Just moved this to the magazine, and tagged it up here. The revision i
> used was the latest as of now
> (https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=F22_Final_release_announcement&oldid=414252)
> 
> the post in the magazine is here:
> http://fedoramagazine.org/?p=8927&preview_id=8927&preview=true
> 
> In a previous thread, i talked about having a both the announcement on
> the wiki and a slightly different version on the magazine. I went and
> drafted the alternate version up today here (it has a lot more
> screenshots and all that):
> 
> http://fedoramagazine.org/?p=8933&preview_id=8933&preview=true
> 
> Take it or leave it -- if we prefer to have the annoucement there on the
> Magazine, feel free to turf this second one, and not publish it,

Thanks Ryan,
I think it looks great and perfectly fits magazine format!

So personally, I'd pick this one :).

Jaroslav

> 
> cheers,
> ryanlerch
> 
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