[Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Sylvia Sánchez]

I would leave that part as it is, isn't that harsh. And it's good to see a
different point of view.



My thoughts.
Cheers,
Sylvia



On Sunday, 7 February 16, Justin W. Flory <jflory7 at gmail.com> wrote:

> On 02/07/2016 11:32 AM, charles profitt wrote:
> > I just finished editing the Neville Cross article. I want to thank both
> > Neville and William Moreno for working on the article; excellent work
> > gentlemen.
> >
> > Here is the link to the article for final review before publication.
> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=11601&preview_id=11601
>
> Overall, the article looks excellent to me as well. Thanks to all
> involved in putting this article together! Thanks Neville, William, and
> Charles. :)
>
> I only have one lingering thought on this article -- in the last section
> about Software, there are some pretty sharp words said about GNOME.
> While I completely agree that constructive criticism is important and it
> is a good thing to voice concerns, I don't feel like this Magazine
> article is the best place to do it.
>
> Instead of focusing on the negatives of GNOME, I would try to replace it
> with some positive thoughts either on the desktop or another
> environment. Using positive words over the negative will have a more
> resounding impact on the reader and will also reflect well on Fedora.
> Since there is such a large readership base for the Magazine, I could
> imagine someone reading the last bit and thinking, "Oh, even Fedora
> contributors don't even like Fedora!" Obviously this isn't true if you
> read the rest of the article, but it can be easy for someone who is
> skimming to take things out of context.
>
> However, like I said, overall, I think this is a fantastic article and
> is a great testament to the Fedora community. With a little bit of
> rephrasing to the bottom portion, I think this article will be ready to
> ship on Friday.
>
> --
> Cheers,
> Justin W. Flory
> jflory7 at gmail.com <javascript:;>
>
>
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