Proposed BugZappers text for bugs filed against orphaned packages

[Jonathan Kamens]

On 02/08/2010 07:01 PM, Adam Williamson wrote:
> This bug has been filed against an orphaned package - that is, a package
> which has no currently active maintainer. We are happy to accept your
> report, but the fact that the package is orphaned means you may
> unfortunately be unlikely to receive a positive response.
"/may/ unfortunately be /unlikely/" is redundant.  Try, "... but 
unfortunately, the fact that the package is orphaned means it is 
unlikely you will receive a positive response."

Other than that, it looks great.

   jik

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