Fedora Release notes - just a few more strings

[Jérôme Fenal]

2013/12/10 Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>:
> I've just updated POTs on Transifex for the Fedora 20 Release Notes.
> There isn't a lot, just a section on 3D printing that was commented out
> pending package reviews. Note to self: Publican does not create strings
> for commented out content!
>
> You can find updated builds at
> https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/ for your review. No
> issues building so far.
>
> Thanks for your efforts, and happy translating.

Hi Pete,

For consistency sake, can you please set the columns either in or out
of the emphasis tags?
<emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:
<emphasis>Plan better:</emphasis>
<emphasis>Build Stronger:</emphasis>

Double column in the same sentence:
<emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:There's no prepare button, because
there is no need to prepare:
The second one could be replaced by a point "."

And avoid usage of see vocab as per guidelines -> s/see/refer to/

Regards,

J.
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Jérôme Fenal