[Bug 545371] New: F12 release notes: typo, inconsistency, and run-on sentence

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Summary: F12 release notes: typo, inconsistency, and run-on sentence

https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=545371

Summary: F12 release notes: typo, inconsistency, and run-on
                    sentence
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: Linux
            Status: NEW
          Severity: medium
          Priority: low
         Component: release-notes
        AssignedTo: [e-mail]
        ReportedBy: [e-mail]
         QAContact: [e-mail]
                CC: [e-mail], [e-mail]
    Classification: Fedora

1.2.4
"Final size is entirely determined by the type os[sic] release being installed
and the packages selected during installation."

4.1.4.2
The style of the gconftool-2 command listing is different from the one in the
previous section (maybe because it's inside a buletted list?)

4.4
Thusnelda
"This release features this next generation codec, compared to libtheora 1.0,
the new encoder can produce comparable quality encodings at a lower bitrate, or
better quality at the same bitrate."
Run-on sentence ...

[Bug 545371] F12 release notes: typo, inconsistency, and run-on sentence

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