On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
nack.
1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was incorrect,
because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on
the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the discussion
was as long as it was.
2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this.
3. s/assure/ensure
4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
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