[Fedora-spins] Thoughts on spins.fp.o one-line descriptions

[P Papadeas]

On Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 4:42 AM, Aaron Faanes <dafrito at gmail.com> wrote:
> I think a few of the one-line descriptions on
> http://spins.fedoraproject.org/ could be tweaked to provide a clearer
> description of the spin, and I'm wondering if the list feels the same
> way.
>
> Here's ones that I like:
> KDE - A complete, modern desktop built using the K Desktop Environment (KDE).
> LXDE - A light, fast, less-resource hungry desktop environment.
> Games - A perfect show-case of the best games available in Fedora.
> XFCE - A complete, well-integrated Xfce desktop.
> BrOffice - Brazilian localized spin that provides the legal brand for
> OpenOffice.org in Brazil.
> FEL - Fedora's high-end hardware design and simulation platform.
>
> Here's ones that leave me wanting more:
> Security - Security analysis tools.
> SoaS - Discover. Reflect. Share. Learn.
> Moblin -The future of the mobile internet.
> Design - Open Creativity.
>
> I wrote up some suggestions to provide some food for thought. Lots of
> these are based on the extended descriptions. I included the current
> one-liners for reference purposes:
>
> SoaS - Discover. Reflect. Share. Learn.
> SoaS - An child-oriented spin featuring the award-winning Sugar
> Learning Platform.
> SoaS - A environment tailored for kids, featuring the award-winning
> Sugar Learning Platform.
> SoaS - A environment for kids.
> SoaS - Fedora for kids, built on Sugar.
> SoaS - Fedora for kids, powered by Sugar.
> SoaS - Fedora for kids, built on the Sugar Learning Platform.
> (For this one, could it be called "Sugar"? When I read SoaS, I think
> of SaaS. Maybe I'm dyslexic. ;) )
>
> Moblin - The future of the mobile internet.
> Moblin - An environment designed with the mobile user in mind.
> Moblin - Designed with the mobile user in mind.
> Moblin - An elegant, lightweight desktop designed for the mobile user.
>
> Design - Open Creativity.
> Design - A suite brimming with multimedia production and publishing tools

Design - A suite brimming with multimedia production, graphics design
and publishing tools.

This seems like a complete one-liner for the Design Suite :)

Thanks for stepping up for this!

> Design - Multimedia production and publishing tools.
> Design - Fedora custom-made for the creative user.

~π

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