Query on Magazine post

[Trupti Kini]

Hi,
    Thank you so much for the suggestions. I have made the necessary
changes. Please tell me if I still need to work on it.


*Regards,*
Trupti Kini
Research Assistant, FOSSEE
Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay
http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/

On Sun, Feb 8, 2015 at 8:19 PM, Chaoyi Zha <summermontreal at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Can you please proofread your article and remove grammar, spelling, and
> other issues?
> For instance, "Fedoraproject" should be "the Fedora Project". We should
> also not link to the India Fedora wiki page when referring to the Fedora
> Project.
>
> The "What is *Fedora*???" section can also be cut out -- the Fedora
> magazine does not have to introduce what Fedora is. I don't personally
> think you should include "For contributing or any queries related to
> contribution" in a release party report.
> It is unrelated and should not be placed in a blog article that is
> supposed to detail an event. That kind of information has a place on your
> event flyers, but not on a blog post, IMHO.
>
> The article seems more like a wiki article than a blog article. Don't let
> my criticism wear you down, though. It's just my personal opinion.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Chaoyi
>
>
> On Sun Feb 08 2015 at 09:40:31 Trupti Kini <kinitrupti at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>     I have posted the article for publishing. How long it usually takes
>> for the review? I wanted to add images to the article but I din't find *Add
>> media* option. Can anyone please guide me?
>>
>>
>> *Regards,*
>> Trupti Kini
>> Research Assistant, FOSSEE
>> Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay
>> http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/
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