[Bug 1361846] New: Typos & Reformulations needed

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1361846

Bug ID: 1361846
           Summary: Typos & Reformulations needed
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: virtualization-getting-started-guide
          Assignee: [e-mail]
          Reporter: [e-mail]
        QA Contact: [e-mail]
                CC: [e-mail], [e-mail]

Description of problem:
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https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/23/html/Virtualization_Getting_S...

contains this text:

"The management tools can be located on separate physical machines from the
host using secure protocols. libvirt is the the foundation of the Gnome
application: gnome-boxes is built apon. "

This probably needs reformulation.

[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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Glen Rundblom  changed:

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--- Comment #1 from Glen Rundblom  ---
Cleaned up section of Products.xml, about libvirt and removed the double the
and un-needed text at the end of the paragraph

Committed to the new pagure.io repo:
https://pagure.io/virt-getting-started-guide

Thanks for catching that,
-Glen

[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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Kevin Alon Goldblatt  changed:

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[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1361846

Kevin Alon Goldblatt  changed:

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