[Design Team] #189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion

[fedora-badges]

#189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion
----------------------------------+-----------------------------------------
Reporter:  nightmoves             |       Owner:  nobody       
    Type:  other artwork request  |      Status:  new          
Priority:  minor                  |   Component:  Other Artwork
Severity:  Quick & Easy           |    Keywords:               
----------------------------------+-----------------------------------------
 Before we start printing/publishing stuff for the the F16 Sleeve Artwork
 I'd like to make a small suggestion about the content on the cover with
 respect to the F15s and so on that had this but doesn't seem right.

 Where it says " We hope you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install it
 to your computer....".  The "If so" part makes it seem like a condition,
 wherein if you like using fedora, go ahead, else what?? Maybe we should
 have the "If so" part removed.

-- 
Ticket URL: <https://fedorahosted.org/design-team/ticket/189>
Design Team <http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Design>
Fedora Design Team