#370: Poster and Standee required for FUDCon APAC 2015
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Reporter: pravins | Owner:
Type: Print/Swag Design | Status: new
Priority: medium | Severity: Moderately Involved
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Comment (by pravins):
I got feedback for content from Rakesh Ghatvisave. Its as follows:
* Missing indefinite article “a” in the bullet points intro line - “Are
you Student.”
Suggestion: change to “Are you a Student.”
* Missing indefinite article “a” in the 4th bullet point - “Become
Contributor
Suggestion: Change to “Become a Contributor”
( Indefinite articles are always important in conveying ideas in any
professional written content)
* 5th bullet point “Share idea through...”
I believe many ideas could be shared, so why not make it plural -
“Shares ideaS through...”
* Do we need the https protocol syntax "http://"? Of what benefit is it? I
believe it is unnecessarily crowding the invite. How about keeping it
plain and minimalistic – fudcon.in? Without the syntax, it looks neat.
Having protocol syntax in any event invitation is not very appealing.
* Lastly, very trivial point maybe a space could be added between the
dates: "26 - 28" instead of "26-28"
'''Some from me :)'''
Venue: MIT College of Engineering,
Department of Computer Engineering,
Pune, India
"Are you Student? How FUDCon is right for you?" Replace this line with
"Why should I come to FUDCon"
Remove "Become contributor"
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