Origins of Fedora article ready to review

[Silvia Sánchez]

Hello folks!

I have this article finished and ready to get some feedback.  Personally I
feel that the section about first hand impressions needs editing.  Looks
too long and heavy to me.  I also think it would be nice to have some
screenshots but I don't know what others think about it. It's definitely
needing a banner image.  I can provide or make one, if you like. Please,
check the facts in the history line, I tried to keep it simple and short
but since this falls before my time using Fedora I might have made a
mistake or two.

This is the link:  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview

Kind regards,
Lailah

[K. K.]

Remember the old saying: "a picture tells a thousand words".

On Wed, 25 Dec 2019, 21:27 Silvia Sánchez, <bhkohane(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  Hello folks!
>
>  I have this article finished and ready to get some feedback.  Personally I
>  feel that the section about first hand impressions needs editing.  Looks
>  too long and heavy to me.  I also think it would be nice to have some
>  screenshots but I don't know what others think about it. It's definitely
>  needing a banner image.  I can provide or make one, if you like. Please,
>  check the facts in the history line, I tried to keep it simple and short
>  but since this falls before my time using Fedora I might have made a
>  mistake or two.
>
>  This is the link:  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview
>
>  Kind regards,
>  Lailah
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[Silvia Sánchez]

I agree.  Does anyone has screenshots from Fedora Core era?  Or should I
use Wikipedia or similar?





On Thu, 26 Dec 2019 at 01:27, K. K. <karliskavacis(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  Remember the old saying: "a picture tells a thousand
> words".
>
>  On Wed, 25 Dec 2019, 21:27 Silvia Sánchez, <bhkohane(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
>
> > Hello folks!
> >
> > I have this article finished and ready to get some feedback.  Personally I
> > feel that the section about first hand impressions needs editing.  Looks
> > too long and heavy to me.  I also think it would be nice to have some
> > screenshots but I don't know what others think about it. It's definitely
> > needing a banner image.  I can provide or make one, if you like. Please,
> > check the facts in the history line, I tried to keep it simple and short
> > but since this falls before my time using Fedora I might have made a
> > mistake or two.
> >
> > This is the link:  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview
> >
> > Kind regards,
> > Lailah
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>

[Alessio]

On Thu, Dec 26, 2019, 8:45 AM Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  I agree.  Does anyone has screenshots from Fedora Core era?  Or
> should I
>  use Wikipedia or similar?
>  
There is a 2018 article that provide a Fedora Core  virtual machine.

https://fedoramagazine.org/celebrate-fifteen-years-fedora/

Maybe it can be useful to grab some screenshots.

Ciao,
A.