That's pretty cool Paul, I'll definitely try that out sometime soon.
Steve
On 17/04/19 10:12 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID
stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a
couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them
like disks:
$ sudo -i
# for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024
conv=noerror,sync ; done
# for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like
/dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
# losetup -D
# rm -f diskfile{0..3}
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
> sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
> said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must
go on.
>
>
> On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>> I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
>> active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read
about,"
>> etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
>> passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
>> fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text
up
>> too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
>> fine-tuning.
>>
>> Paul
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>>> I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability
>>> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
>>> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
>>> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
>>> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
>>> everything some days.
>>>
>>> SDS
>>>
>>> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>>>> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
>>>> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
>>>> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
>>>> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
>>>> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by
Klingons" at
>>>> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
>>>> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
>>>>
>>>> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
>>>> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
>>>> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
>>>> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
>>>>
>>>> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
>>>> subheadings for more readability.
>>>>
>>>> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
>>>> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
>>>> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Paul
>>>>
>>>> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
>>>>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
couldn't
>>>>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it
stands
>>>>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
>>>>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the
statements is a
>>>>>> definite improvement. :-)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
>>>>>>> Edited the mdadm
>>>>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>>>>>>>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>>>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>>>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * * *
>>>>>>>> =========================================
>>>>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
>>>>>>>> =========================================
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full
logs are
>>>>>>>> available at
>>>>>>>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>>>> .
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Meeting summary
>>>>>>>> ---------------
>>>>>>>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
>>>>>>>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up
significantly from previous
>>>>>>>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
>>>>>>>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby
either (stickster,
>>>>>>>> 20:05:56)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about
extending social network
>>>>>>>> access (stickster, 20:11:52)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
>>>>>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:12:32)
>>>>>>>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster,
20:13:38)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:13:58)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and
publish 2019-04-12
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:15:19)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
>>>>>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:16:30)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
(stickster,
>>>>>>>> 20:25:01)
>>>>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
>>>>>>> jakfrost
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
(stickster, 20:26:05)
>>>>>>>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster,
20:26:24)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:26:42)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on
Fedora IoT article for
>>>>>>>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
>>>>>>>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:34:22)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article
for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:36:28)
>>>>>>>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---
(stickster, 20:37:30)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to
advise on status
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:34)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is
updated properly
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:45)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
>>>>>>>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster,
20:47:29)
>>>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
>>>>>>>> (stickster, 20:47:31)
>>>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell
tuning and get them
>>>>>>>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
>>>>>>>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr
15: K3s (ryanlerch)
>>>>>>>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch
image) -- Fri Apr 19:
>>>>>>>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Action Items
>>>>>>>> ------------
>>>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social
network access
>>>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
for Monday Apr
>>>>>>>> 15
>>>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
>>>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>>>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get
them into
>>>>>>>> drafting
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Action Items, by person
>>>>>>>> -----------------------
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
get them into
>>>>>>>> drafting
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for Monday
>>>>>>>> Apr 15
>>>>>>>> * stickster
>>>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending
social network access
>>>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
>>>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
>>>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on
status
>>>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
>>>>>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
>>>>>>>> * (none)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> People Present (lines said)
>>>>>>>> ---------------------------
>>>>>>>> * stickster (109)
>>>>>>>> * jakfrost (18)
>>>>>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
>>>>>>>> * zodbot (12)
>>>>>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
>>>>>>>> * sdgathman (6)
>>>>>>>> * pjones (2)
>>>>>>>> * asamalik (0)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
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