Mohammad,
I will start reviewing your file, here is a quick notes:
- Stopping YP map server:
Don't translate map here. YP is the NIS daemon that map certain thing
to other,
so it does not really mean "khara2et", I would leave it "YP map"
- Could not set 802.1Q VLAN parameters.
it is not "wasa2et". It should read as:
lam 2astate3 3edad khasa2es 802.1Q VLAN
- Usage ...
Use "estekhdam" rather than "este3mal"
- Starubg Red Hat Network Daemon
First, don't translate "Red Hat Network" , it is trademark for a
product, so per
the new guidlines, leave it as is.
Second, it is 3afareet el shabaka LOL
it should be: gary bed2 khedmat Red Hat Network
- Missing parameter 'IPv6-gateway' (arg 2)
parameter here is not waseet!
- Unmounting CIFS filesystems
Unmounting is not "ezalet tasbeet" .. we need to find word for mount
and unmount
- Shutting down display manager
"gary ekaf moder el 3ard" ... hmm
How abuot "gary eghlak mota7akem al 3ard 3ala el shasha" , or something that
explain this better.
- Missing remote IPv4 address of tunnel, configuration is not valid
How about :
"Tahy2a khate2ah, yankos 3enwan IPv4 leltaraf al akher"
I would drop tunnel here as adding "nafaq" would not make sense or tell
what it is! Any comment here?
For now kefaya :)
I will resume later once we discuss these
Sherif
Quoting Mohammad Ghoniem <Mohammad.Ghoniem(a)univ-ubs.fr>:
Salâms,
initscripts attached. 5 fuzzy strings remaining. It would be nice to
have the whole file reviewed during QA...
salâm
Mohammad
Munzir Taha wrote:
> في يوم الإثنين 18 جمادى الثّاني 1426 10:39,
> كتب Mohammad Ghoniem:
>
>> Some progress but not finished yet. Sorry for the delay.
>>
>
> It's good that you are letting us in the know ;)
>
> /me sending a polite message to others and by others I mean ... ;)
>
>