Re: Article draft: Fleet Commander
by Oliver Gutierrez
Thank you very much Dale!
I know my grammar is not very good, but I continue learning :)
Thanks for all the tips and explainations about my mistakes. I value them
the most and I'm learning a lot.
I will apply the changes to the document and after that I will probably cut
it in two parts. The setup and the usage.
Will come back with news! Thanks and cheers!
On Wed, Jun 27, 2018 at 3:23 AM Dale Raby <daleraby(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Oliver,
>
> I opened your .txt article in LibreOffice Writer, made notes for you in
> red, the saved the altered document with a .odt filename extension. Mostly
> it reads coherently and an English speaker might find some of the phrasing
> a little unusual, but he would understand most of it. Even us Anglos don't
> always agree on how to say some things.
>
> All in all, its a well-written article.
>
> On Tue, Jun 26, 2018 at 4:45 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Thank you very much Dale. I'm fixing the whole things you pointed. Almost
>> all of them make sense from the IT part. :)
>>
>> I will finish the modifications maybe today or tomorrown and I will
>> change the document to a text document so you can review it better :)
>>
>> Thanks for your help and your time!
>>
>> On Sat, Jun 23, 2018 at 4:53 AM Dale Raby <daleraby(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Just put in some suggestions. Your English is better than my Spanish
>>> but I found a few minor grammatical errors.
>>>
>>> The biggest problem I found was that there seems to be a large block of
>>> text that is a duplication. The section with the graphics is difficult for
>>> me to view with my slow connection here.
>>>
>>> Google documents are always difficult for me to edit. Google assumes
>>> that everyone has very fast connections and modern machines. I have
>>> neither. It put me into "suggestion mode", which is actually very clever
>>> of them... if only I had a fast connection!
>>>
>>> Bear in mind, that while I am a native speaker of English and have
>>> actually done quite a bit of writing, I am NOT an IT expert. So.... take
>>> any suggestions I give you with caution. I could be misunderstanding your
>>> intent.
>>>
>>> I will look at this again tomorrow when I am not half asleep.
>>> Neighbor's cattle (Herfords, two heifers, a calf and a 1,200 pound bull)
>>> got out onto the road this evening. I and former US Congressman Alan Lasee
>>> helped a police officer and the owner get them back into the enclosure.
>>> Was quite enough excitement for me!
>>>
>>> Dale
>>>
>>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:14 PM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com
>>> > wrote:
>>>
>>>> Thank you very much Mr Raby! Just give me the time to separate it in
>>>> sections (so I will need to ad intros and outros for each block) and after
>>>> that I will need a review.
>>>>
>>>> In the meantime, I will give you the access you required :)
>>>>
>>>> You just need to access the document in this URL
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1...
>>>>
>>>> Then Google will allow you to ask for document access and I will
>>>> receive a notification to give you the permissions.
>>>>
>>>> If you do that and you see I had not answered or allowed, please tell
>>>> me because maybe the notification is lost in my inbox.
>>>>
>>>> Again thanks.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> P.D. Swear words in spanish are usually enough to be very communicative
>>>> of your current mood :P
>>>>
>>>> P.D. 2: After trying to send this email again, google asked me to give
>>>> automatic access to view the document to recipients, so maybe you will be
>>>> able to see it after receiving this.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:35 PM Dale Raby <daleraby(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Senor Gutierrez:
>>>>>
>>>>> I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic
>>>>> issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is
>>>>> limited
>>>>> to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
>>>>>
>>>>> I need permission to access your document though.
>>>>>
>>>>> Dale
>>>>>
>>>>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <
>>>>> ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> > Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can
>>>>> separate
>>>>> > them into more "atomic" pieces :)
>>>>> >
>>>>> > Thanks for reviewing!
>>>>> >
>>>>> >
>>>>> > On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> >
>>>>> > > On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <
>>>>> ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
>>>>> > > wrote:
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Hi there.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul
>>>>> for
>>>>> > > review.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_
>>>>> > Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as
>>>>> English
>>>>> > is
>>>>> > > > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
>>>>> > welcome.
>>>>> > >
>>>>> > > Hi Oliver,
>>>>> > >
>>>>> > > There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too
>>>>> > > long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it
>>>>> > > might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you
>>>>> > > consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run
>>>>> like
>>>>> > > this:
>>>>> > >
>>>>> > > * What is FC and how do you install it?
>>>>> > > * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
>>>>> > >
>>>>> > > --
>>>>> > > Paul
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Editorial board meeting recap 2018-Jun-20
by Paul W. Frields
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2018-06-20/magazine.2018...
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
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Meeting started by stickster at 20:00:03 UTC. The full logs are
available at
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2018-06-20/magazine.2018...
.
Meeting summary
---------------
* Roll call (stickster, 20:00:06)
* Breaking news (stickster, 20:05:52)
* We had a big announcement this morning about CoreOS, so schedule has
shifted from last week's predictions (stickster, 20:06:12)
* Last week's stats (stickster, 20:07:37)
* Week of June 11: ~57.7K page views (stickster, 20:08:18)
* Month of June so far: ~174.1K pageviews, on track for ~280-300K
(stickster, 20:08:53)
* Pending review (stickster, 20:10:48)
* LINK: Pending review posts (stickster, 20:11:51)
* ACTION: stickster to edit LVM upgrade article (still on deck)
(stickster, 20:12:03)
* Draft posts to review (stickster, 20:12:41)
* LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&post_type=...
(stickster, 20:12:49)
* LINK:
https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraprojec...
(cverna, 20:16:18)
* ACTION: cverna to review pipenv article for publication likely
Monday 2018-06-25 (stickster, 20:17:30)
* Pitches to review (stickster, 20:18:23)
* LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pitch&post_type=...
(stickster, 20:18:26)
* --- NVIDIA card installation --- (stickster, 20:18:48)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=21714&preview=1&_ppp=6bff8bebde
(stickster, 20:19:22)
* AGREED: Editors approve pitch for NVIDIA article (stickster,
20:21:06)
* ACTION: sub_pop email author for NVIDIA article + cc list approving
pitch (stickster, 20:21:37)
* --- FOSS git managers --- (stickster, 20:22:04)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=21705&preview=1&_ppp=8276ef3f03
(stickster, 20:22:06)
* AGREED: Editors approve git forge pitch, make it a series
(stickster, 20:25:38)
* ACTION: ryanlerch email author and cc list to approve pitch and ask
for this to be a short series (stickster, 20:26:19)
* --- Libreoffice --- (stickster, 20:27:26)
* LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=21561&action=edit
(stickster, 20:27:33)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=21561&preview=1&_ppp=fc4b9b1fa1
(stickster, 20:27:44)
* ACTION: stickster edit libreoffice article, ryanlerch do image
(stickster, 20:30:13)
* LINK:
https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraprojec...
(sub_pop, 20:36:06)
* AGREED: Fri 2018-06-22 LVM (stickster, image:ryanlerch) -- Mon
2018-06-25 Pipenv (cverna, image:ryanlerch) -- Wed 2018-06-27
Anaconda followup (ryanlerch) -- Fri 2018-06-29 Libreoffice
(pfrields, image:TBD) (stickster, 20:44:19)
* All other business (open floor) (stickster, 20:45:03)
* LINK: https://gitlab.com/link/setup (sub_pop, 20:49:09)
Meeting ended at 20:55:54 UTC.
Action Items
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* cverna to review pipenv article for publication likely Monday
2018-06-25
* sub_pop email author for NVIDIA article + cc list approving pitch
* ryanlerch email author and cc list to approve pitch and ask for this
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* stickster edit libreoffice article, ryanlerch do image
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* ryanlerch
* ryanlerch email author and cc list to approve pitch and ask for this
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* stickster edit libreoffice article, ryanlerch do image
* stickster
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