On Mon, Nov 16, 2009 at 11:42:32PM -0500, Eric Christensen wrote:
On Tue, 2009-11-17 at 06:43 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> On 11/17/2009 06:31 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > I'll be using the text found here for tomorrow's announcement to
> > fedora-announce-list:
> >
> >
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_Announcement
> >
> > I noticed we've dropped our old legacy habit of producing a humorous
> > preface, in favor of a more cut and dried approach. I'll likely
> > precede the text with a short (promise!) thank-you note and a URL for
> >
http://get.fedoraproject.org at the top, for people who want to cut to
> > the chase.
> >
> > Thanks to everyone who worked on the announcement text.
>
> I just realized that I didn't actually discuss that choice. I thought
> our Fedora 12 Beta announcement got good reactions and wanted to just
> improve on that with minor tweaks rather than use the humour approach.
> Hope that is ok with everyone.
>
> Rahul
>
Works for me. I was just happy that someone had tweaked it for
final! :)
I just went through and did a final once-over for grammar/style
tweaks. I'm now copying it for posting to the list.
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