Virtualization Quick Start Content Update

[Jason]

https://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start has been
updated as much as my meager knowledge can do. I am humbly requesting
some technical and grammar editing so we can make sure it is a sane
document. Thanks!

-Jason

[Chris Curran]

Jason wrote:
>  https://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start has
> been
>  updated as much as my meager knowledge can do. I am humbly requesting
>  some technical and grammar editing so we can make sure it is a sane
>  document. Thanks!
>
>  -Jason
>     
I'm willing to take up the challenge. I'll have a look this weekend and

see what I can do to help.

- Chris

[Chris Curran]

Christopher Curran wrote:
>  Jason wrote:
> > https://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start has been
> > updated as much as my meager knowledge can do. I am humbly requesting
> > some technical and grammar editing so we can make sure it is a sane
> > document. Thanks!
> >
> > -Jason
> >   
>  I'm willing to take up the challenge. I'll have a look this weekend 
>  and see what I can do to help.
>
>  - Chris
>  
I've updated the Virtualization quick start page[1] with some technical 
and editorial loving. It is still severely lacking good information on 
creating guests (especially those other proprietary operating systems). 
The information on migration and cobbler should probably be taken out as 
well. Those topics are far too tricky for a single wiki quick start page 
as each would require at least a chapter to get a user up and running.

I'll have a look at writing some more on administration and creating 
guests next time I have to recompile rawhide :)



- Chris


[1]  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start

[Jason]

On Wed, 2008-08-20 at 12:52 +1000, Christopher Curran wrote:
>  Christopher Curran wrote:
>  > Jason wrote:
>  >> https://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start has been
>  >> updated as much as my meager knowledge can do. I am humbly requesting
>  >> some technical and grammar editing so we can make sure it is a sane
>  >> document. Thanks!
>  >>
>  >> -Jason
>  >>   
>  > I'm willing to take up the challenge. I'll have a look this weekend 
>  > and see what I can do to help.
>  >
>  > - Chris
>  >
>  I've updated the Virtualization quick start page[1] with some technical 
>  and editorial loving. It is still severely lacking good information on 
>  creating guests (especially those other proprietary operating systems). 
>  The information on migration and cobbler should probably be taken out as 
>  well. Those topics are far too tricky for a single wiki quick start page 
>  as each would require at least a chapter to get a user up and running.
>  
>  I'll have a look at writing some more on administration and creating 
>  guests next time I have to recompile rawhide :)
>  
>  
>  
>  - Chris
>  
>  
>  [1]  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Virtualization_Quick_Start
>   
Thanks for the input and I took out the cobbler/koan part. :)

-Jason