[Bug 1361846] New: Typos & Reformulations needed

[Red Hat Bugzilla]

https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1361846

            Bug ID: 1361846
           Summary: Typos & Reformulations needed
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: virtualization-getting-started-guide
          Assignee: dayleparker(a)redhat.com
          Reporter: bughunt(a)gluino.name
        QA Contact: docs-qa(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
                CC: dayleparker(a)redhat.com, docs(a)lists.fedoraproject.org



Description of problem:
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https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/23/html/Virtualization_Gettin...

contains this text:

"The management tools can be located on separate physical machines from the
host using secure protocols. libvirt is the the foundation of the Gnome
application: gnome-boxes is built apon. "

This probably needs reformulation.

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[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1361846

Glen Rundblom <grundblom(a)fedoraproject.org&gt; changed:

           What    |Removed                     |Added
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             Status|NEW                         |MODIFIED
                 CC|                            |grundblom(a)fedoraproject.org



--- Comment #1 from Glen Rundblom <grundblom(a)fedoraproject.org&gt; ---
Cleaned up section of Products.xml, about libvirt and removed the double the
and un-needed text at the end of the paragraph

Committed to the new pagure.io repo:
https://pagure.io/virt-getting-started-guide

Thanks for catching that,
-Glen

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[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1361846

Kevin Alon Goldblatt <kgoldbla(a)redhat.com&gt; changed:

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[Bug 1361846] Typos & Reformulations needed

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Kevin Alon Goldblatt <kgoldbla(a)redhat.com&gt; changed:

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