On Wed, 2014-11-26 at 23:04 +0700, Truong Anh. Tuan wrote:
I am writing a series of Talking Points for Ambassadors to talk
Fedora Server 21 during upcoming events.
Please check out the very first draft here:
All ideas and comments are welcome.
Sorry for the long turnaround on this, it's been a busy week.
The content looks good to me, but I think we want to stick with present
or past tense. Not "A new D-BUS service will be made available", but
"Fedora Server offers a new D-BUS service", etc.
Otherwise, great work, thanks!